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Larry and Oliver

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Genre: Mature
Date Added: 10 November 2004
Last Update: 21 August 2006
URL: protectmyballs.comicgen.com/
Archive URL: protectmyballs.comicgen.com/
Current Comic Ranking: 20408/23321
Views This Month: 3   (More...)
Average Views a Month: 28   (More...)
Favourite of: 15 members
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Synopsis:
A semi-coherent tale following two youths as they encounter off-beat humor and esoteric pop-culture references. And poop.

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Genesis 13 4/5
Site: Nothing purty to look at, but simple enough to understand. You can tell which is the first and back arrows, which is always a good thing. I also like that you have the calendar on every day.
However, even a simple site should at least have a color background. It will probably be beneficial to you to even have just a simple background, nothin' complicated. Sorry, but I like purty sites.
Grade: C +

Art: The beginning, well, we all get better over time...anyway, the art isn't very clear at the beginning. In other words, it's blurry and poorly Photoshopped or whatever to make it B&W. In addition, the text is far too small in the first few comics to be convenient (and if the text is too hard to read, people will often give up right away) and you definitely needed more backgrounds, and more consistency in color vs. B&W (a bit hypocritical, I know ).
On the bright side, your art and overall quality improves as you go along. This is, of course, expected; no one's first comics are perfect. I do like the photo backgrounds you start using, because even though they aren't your own, they aren't plain. Anatomy is fairly good (as pictured by the several naked girls you feature o_O) but it could use a little bit o' work.
Grade: B-

Teh funneh/writing: Although there are quite a few crude jokes (what do you expect in a comic called "Protect My Balls", though? Hehe...) they're pretty funny. However, you do need to get a bit away from the "random" jokes...y'know, like that opening one..where that guy just gets shot. It would be funny if that concept wasn't so overused, but unfortunately, it is.
Also, grammar needs work. A suggestion I make to EVERYONE is, get someone to do a once-over on your dialogue before you publish it - even I do it. Sometimes they'll catch something you don't.
Grade: B

Overall: I like your comic, even with its...oddities. However, there is always room for improvement and stuff. So, just keep improving and you'll always be fine!

Overall Grade: B-

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