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PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 10:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I suppose in theory it is always better to know than not to know--and it would help you in other stuff!

I know a program like Microsoft Word (in English) will check (English) grammar, although of course machine grammar isn't always correct. I'd think there'd be some sort of free grammar checking software somewhere, but the first three or so Google hits for "grammar check" were online things that were pretty bad, so I dunno. :|
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

new episode is here http://gunmonkey.kissagalleria.com/index.php?season=22&mode=

i tried to write as good english as i could without help, but left "the monkey speech" in broken english... i hope this is a good compromise.

i like to have brutal feedback ... if you think "the soul of the gunmonkey" is lost or something , please tell me.

for me what makes a good comic is the little things. i am afraid that the lanquage could be one thing with gunmonkey and without broken english it is just one bulk comic more.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 10:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I dunno, I think this is a good episode! :D Besides which, I don't know of any other webcomics that manage to have such absurd yet somehow convincing dialogue, regardless of whether or not the grammar is correct. So I guess I'm trying to say that what I particularly like about it is that the comic's whole point of view is broken, not just the dialogue.

The conversation between monkey and the guys locked behind the door is pretty amusing. I really like the hallucination ("a traaaaaap" :D), and the drawings of the heads in the darkness of the locked room. And the stark black and white drawing on the "I am the hero here" page is super!
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 10:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ooh by the way the archive page is a few episodes out of date, also the numbers above the comic don't match the episodes they take you to. Your web dude must be slacking again. ;)
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 11:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

thank you for feedback... yes webpages are what they are... but i can't complain, i really don't know why this my webguy even put this comic in his site... i sure know that this comic is not moneymaker...

i am surprised that somebody even reads the archive Smile
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 2012 4:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

New to reading your comic...i initially skimmed a little through season 18 thinking it was the first season.
Favorite pages from Season 18:
page 17 - I love the layout...it reminds me a lot of some of Dave McKeans work in the Signal To Noise book.
page 28 - You nailed the dog...that dog is somewhere between rabid and excitedly jumping 15 vertical feet...You couldn't have captured the animal's emotion here any better.
page 32 The artwork here is great and a little disjointed, which i am speculating that you were going for..some sort of disorientation in the character. It's beautifully done and seems like a metaphor for drowning as some sort of some sort of peaceful downward spiral.
Anyways keep up the good work..I'll head back to the start and catch up the right way...

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 2012 6:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

yes, "the first new season" is actually season 18. many readers started in season 1 and didn't like it, so I ask my webwizard to change things so that comic starts "new style comics".
I think the story works like that also. you can read archive episodes as a backround information if you like, but my style was still evolving (as it is still) and I am not very proud of those.

thank you for your feedback.

ps. the dog is actually my on dog, Frank
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 6:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

there is my interview http://www.comicbookandmoviereviews.com/2012/08/gunmonkey-webcomic-from-finland.html#axzz245bADUCI

new episode is about halfway drawn. i would say it comes out about december..
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 02, 2012 10:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

what?!?!? a new and "last" episode of gunmonkey? http://gunmonkey.kissagalleria.com/index.php?season=25&mode=
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 20, 2013 7:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

you knew it. it wasn't last. but don't know how much longer i can beat the dead horse... here is still another episode http://gunmonkey.kissagalleria.com/index.php?season=26&mode=
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 27, 2013 7:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

and again: new episode http://gunmonkey.kissagalleria.com/index.php?season=27&mode=

website is better now, less bugs , bigger picture size... you wanted it (i quess, nobody asked though..) and now it is done.
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PostPosted: Fri May 10, 2013 11:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

again.... new episode... new episode of Gunmonkey http://gunmonkey.kissagalleria.com/index.php?season=28&mode= #comics #webcomics

maybe this one is last? i lost my passion to this.
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