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Harrington AW · Joined: 26 Oct 2008 Posts: 843

This is a good comic. I hope it's not headed for a heartbreak.

(pause for groans)

Seriously though, you've done a good job posing and setting the scenes, and the story looks promising. I'm definitely interested to read more.

By the by, If the last page is multiple-choice, I'm not picking Warrentry.

-S
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ps99 · Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 12:15 am Post subject:

Harrington AW wrote:

This is a good comic. I hope it's not headed for a heartbreak.

(pause for groans)

Seriously though, you've done a good job posing and setting the scenes, and the story looks promising. I'm definitely interested to read more.

By the by, If the last page is multiple-choice, I'm not picking Warrentry.

-S

The locations will be rotating - tho the next page begins in Warrentry!
Very Happy

However, the two new characters will certainly be involved in the future.

Thanks for the positive comments . I'm hoping to put out the strip more regularly in it's new format.

Oh and Yes, i did groan! Smile

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ps99 · Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 1:45 am Post subject:

New Page added

http://sites.google.com/site/winger3d/page-9
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dpat57 · Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:22 am Post subject:

You're finally picking up speed, don't lose your velocity, more regular updates are a must!
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ps99 · Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 12:36 am Post subject:

Another Update and a new character

http://sites.google.com/site/winger3d/page-10
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Harrington AW · Joined: 26 Oct 2008 Posts: 843

Lookin' good. I like it.

I didn't see a "previous page" button on the page. Did I just miss it, or is there not one there?

-S
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ps99 · Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 2:07 am Post subject:

Harrington AW wrote:

Lookin' good. I like it.

I didn't see a "previous page" button on the page. Did I just miss it, or is there not one there?

-S

Thanks!

Er, my mistake . It wasn't saved - all corrected now
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dpat57 · Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 1:04 pm Post subject:

You are planning to go full frontal with the guys in the shower room, aren't you? This is the accepted new method of showing characterization.

You could even have a sequence zooming in on their dangly bits apparently talking to each other, which I think would elevate the yardstick even higher.
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ps99 · Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 1:58 pm Post subject:

dpat57 wrote:

You are planning to go full frontal with the guys in the shower room, aren't you? This is the accepted new method of showing characterization.

You could even have a sequence zooming in on their dangly bits apparently talking to each other, which I think would elevate the yardstick even higher.

Only if it quadruples readership in Arbroath! Smile

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dpat57 · Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 2:55 pm Post subject:

ps99 wrote:

Only if it quadruples readership in Arbroath! Smile

I think there's a pretty good chance of that if you can include "man-meat" and "big dangly bits" in your meta tags so they're picked up by avid surfers in Arbroath searching for items of interest.
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ps99 · Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:26 pm Post subject:

New "Football707.com" page added. Robbie Savage fans - look away now! Smile

http://sites.google.com/site/winger3d/football707com
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ps99 · Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 5:25 pm Post subject:

Amazingly, yet another update!

http://sites.google.com/site/winger3d/page-11
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Harrington AW · Joined: 26 Oct 2008 Posts: 843

Nice page! This was a better direction to go in than the full-frontal-burly-football-player thing.

-S
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dpat57 · Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:05 pm Post subject:

Nice poses, but I wondered who she was talking to! Should she be holding a cellphone to her ear, or wearing one of those bluetooth thingamybobs?
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ps99 · Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 12:16 am Post subject:

New Pin up added
http://sites.google.com/site/winger3d/pinups-1
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