I'm an art student, and I was looking for some help with my comic book script.
The layout, which I've had some comments about, is how it's most clear to me. I've found other methods really don't work as well.
The art description is like notes to me, too, so very incomplete, but I hope others can make some sense of it! English isn't my first language, so some things are written down weirdly or clumsily.
What I'd most like critique on is dialogue at this point, since I'm not a writer and not a native English speaker it feels a little clunky to me and I'd love to improve it some!
It was based off the 'Deirdre of the Sorrows' story from Irish mythology.
Here it is! (Google Drive PDF document)
Hope you enjoy, and thanks for reading!