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Joy to the world, an angry little girl

 
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johnathan-wrathborne



Joined: 28 Feb 2017
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2017 11:54 pm    Post subject: Joy to the world, an angry little girl Reply with quote

Heres my webcomic

http://www.wrathborne.org/comic/joy1/

It updates once a week(though in march there will only be 2 updates due to my trying to finish a huge animated project for a deadline).

Joy Fulbright, an 11 year old tomboy. Shes an angry only child who lives with her divorced mother and lives in her own little world with her friends Kimmy and Neil, her schoolyard antagonists Gary and Joanna, and her arch-nemesis...boredom.
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The Putto



Joined: 24 Jun 2009
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 02, 2017 10:30 am    Post subject: Re: Joy to the world, an angry little girl Reply with quote

johnathan-wrathborne wrote:
Heres my webcomic

http://www.wrathborne.org/comic/joy1/

It updates once a week(though in march there will only be 2 updates due to my trying to finish a huge animated project for a deadline).

Joy Fulbright, an 11 year old tomboy. Shes an angry only child who lives with her divorced mother and lives in her own little world with her friends Kimmy and Neil, her schoolyard antagonists Gary and Joanna, and her arch-nemesis...boredom.


Best of luck with it. Looks fun!

Do you mind if I make a suggestion? Perhaps the first panel would work better if she looked really, really sweet. Like puppy dog eyes, softer mouth, more innocent/childlike. That makes the third panel even more shocking when she transforms into a scary girl!!

Just a thought. Keep it up! Very Happy
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johnathan-wrathborne



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PostPosted: Mon Mar 06, 2017 11:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Never thought of that. I think I'll make those changes. Thanks dude!
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The Putto



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PostPosted: Thu Mar 09, 2017 10:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

johnathan-wrathborne wrote:
Never thought of that. I think I'll make those changes. Thanks dude!


No worries at all!
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