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hbar



Joined: 28 Jun 2014
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2014 5:46 am    Post subject: Barn-Megaparsec Reply with quote

Hallo,

I'm new to this, so please go easy on me! I make a comic called Barn-Megaparsec, which is about a month old and still in its beginning stages. I started my first >1 page comic on Wednesday and I'm currently constructing the main storyline.

There's a bit of technical/science type humor and some bad puns (more always coming!), so if you like that sort of thing go ahead and check it out.

If you have any feedback, let me know! Thanks!
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MindChimera



Joined: 03 Feb 2013
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2014 3:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good stuff so far. Some of the technical stuff is going to go right over my tiny brain, but otherwise I'm enjoying it. I like your color schemes a lot, particularly the most recent page.

I see you're trying a bunch of different styles out, from line styles and word balloons. It's obvious that you're new at this (and I see from your comments that you're using a mouse), but that said, I'd like to say that nothing really looks bad so far, just rough. Every page is an improvement. Keep it up. Smile

I think I liked your word bubbles the most on the hangman page, especially since you're having fun with the tails, though I know not putting a border on them can make it hard to keep them from blending into a light-colored page. Though since you aren't using a whole lot of pure white in your pages, you may be able to rock this. Whatever you prefer though.
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