Good stuff so far. Some of the technical stuff is going to go right over my tiny brain, but otherwise I'm enjoying it. I like your color schemes a lot, particularly the most recent page.
I see you're trying a bunch of different styles out, from line styles and word balloons. It's obvious that you're new at this (and I see from your comments that you're using a mouse), but that said, I'd like to say that nothing really looks bad
so far, just rough. Every page is an improvement. Keep it up.
I think I liked your word bubbles the most on the hangman page, especially since you're having fun with the tails, though I know not putting a border on them can make it hard to keep them from blending into a light-colored page. Though since you aren't using a whole lot of pure white in your pages, you may be able to rock this. Whatever you prefer though.