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Cartridge - Now available in comic book form!
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PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2009 4:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I had to go back to the start to get a handle on all this -- and I'm glad I did. It's fun, with a pay-off punchline on just about every page. Art's deceptively simple, with special FX added when needed. Thumbs up. I'll come back to it.
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PostPosted: Fri May 29, 2009 2:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

From the looks of things, it's not your weakest point any more. The off-balance angles and esp. the hand perspective in the left panel give impression of rapid action-movement.

I know the "no love" feeling only too well. Smile Hopefully other readers will be along soon.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 2:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool-lookin' buttons, man! If only your characters had access to the store and could see 'em! Very Happy

I chuckled at the drawing ability page.

Go Dona! She's hot and cool at the same time!
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 7:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dona won't be in the comic much longer?! Noooooooo! <sticks fingers in ears> La la la la, I can't hear you...
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 10:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Congrats, CJ! Good work, nice-lookin' comic.
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