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Nerris



Joined: 12 Feb 2014
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 12, 2014 6:21 pm    Post subject: Coconull Reply with quote

Hi!

I'm publishing a new webcomic called Coconull. There are only 3 entries for now because... I'm a really slow with illustration due to my lack of practice. Embarassed

Here is the URL: http://www.coconull.com/

Thanks for reading. Feel free to give some advices and opinions. Wink

Nerris
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VAST



Joined: 24 Jan 2014
Posts: 37

PostPosted: Wed Feb 12, 2014 8:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really like the style of your webcomic. I also enjoy the quick one liners you have. You only have 3 strips so far, but I would suggest really showcasing your characters personalities the best you can. If you don't have a story line for the reader to follow you need to have strong leads.

I like what you have so far. Keep it up.
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Ronin Glen



Joined: 25 Mar 2013
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 13, 2014 12:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm gonna take a wild guess here that "characters" and "stories" aren't really the point of this comic. It's a gentler variation of XKCD or The Far Side rather than Sam and Fuzzy or Calvin and Hobbes. It's a cute comic (so far) but maybe a little milder than my twisted and rotten brain usually goes for. In fairness, that's probably a good thing Smile
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Nerris



Joined: 12 Feb 2014
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 16, 2014 2:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

VAST wrote:
I really like the style of your webcomic. I also enjoy the quick one liners you have. You only have 3 strips so far, but I would suggest really showcasing your characters personalities the best you can. If you don't have a story line for the reader to follow you need to have strong leads.

I like what you have so far. Keep it up.


VAST, thank you so much! I want to develop the main characters strip by strip, with small amounts of info. The main goal of the webcomic it's just to make you smile, but character development it's something to keep in mind.
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Nerris



Joined: 12 Feb 2014
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 16, 2014 2:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ronin Glen wrote:
I'm gonna take a wild guess here that "characters" and "stories" aren't really the point of this comic. It's a gentler variation of XKCD or The Far Side rather than Sam and Fuzzy or Calvin and Hobbes. It's a cute comic (so far) but maybe a little milder than my twisted and rotten brain usually goes for. In fairness, that's probably a good thing Smile


Ronin Glen, you described perfectly what I would like to achieve Smile Thanks for your opinion!
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VAST



Joined: 24 Jan 2014
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 16, 2014 5:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nerris wrote:
VAST wrote:
I really like the style of your webcomic. I also enjoy the quick one liners you have. You only have 3 strips so far, but I would suggest really showcasing your characters personalities the best you can. If you don't have a story line for the reader to follow you need to have strong leads.

I like what you have so far. Keep it up.


VAST, thank you so much! I want to develop the main characters strip by strip, with small amounts of info. The main goal of the webcomic it's just to make you smile, but character development it's something to keep in mind.


I figured you would. I get that your comic is a gag a day style, but I felt like your characters had personality and I think I would really enjoy your comic if those personalities were highlighted. Keep it up!
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