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Concerning Justice; The Heroic Tale of a Misfit Villain

 
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BradenR.Huggins



Joined: 11 Jan 2014
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 11, 2014 2:42 am    Post subject: Concerning Justice; The Heroic Tale of a Misfit Villain Reply with quote

[img]http://www.theduckwebcomics.com/Concerning_Justice/5445192/[/img]

This is Concerning Justice, A webcomic parody of the Super Hero genre.
Check out the rest of the pages here

http://www.theduckwebcomics.com/Concerning_Justice/5445186/

My name is Braden R. Huggins. I am a young artist and writer with a strong passion for this story. Please comment and critique this comic as you like, I am eager to hear the opinions of others, and thank you for your time Very Happy
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Ronin Glen



Joined: 25 Mar 2013
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 11, 2014 4:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, at the risk of sounding pedantic I'd say first up you need to knock down those file sizes. Your images are roughly 4-5x larger than they should be for art like this. It'll help the pages load and save on bandwidth.

I understand all too well the desire to get feedback but honestly seven pages isn't enough for me to really gauge where you are going with this and whether or not I might want to continue following it. I will say that these pages don't read much like "parody". More like Deconstructionism which sounds super-nerdy but I think is what you are actually going for. Or not. It's only seven pages yet.

Anyway, best wishes for the comic! Never let anyone tell you to give up.

Ronin Glen
kungfumeghan.com
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