A little difficult to see if I'm interested or not when there's only a "coming soon" page and a cover, heh. I'd suggest getting a few pages under your belt for a story comic before really advertising, so people can see if it's something they're looking for.
The font you've picked for the title is a little hard for me to read. Particularly with the word "Crimson", where the I and the M come up. It looks like that could be either a UM or an OM to me.
And your pitch seems to be loaded with spoilers...
Best of luck to you, though. Have fun.