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Uncle Greedy



Joined: 02 Jun 2011
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2012 8:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Art looks good to me.
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RobertEnders



Joined: 18 Nov 2011
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2012 9:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It says "Database Error" for me.
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ioobwebcomic



Joined: 31 Aug 2012
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2012 7:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well that first page got me hooked. Looking forward to the rest of the story :)
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Kirby Miller SK



Joined: 08 Jul 2011
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2012 7:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great artwork! It has that Sin City noir feel to it.

http://kirbymillerserialkiller.com/
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Harrington AW



Joined: 26 Oct 2008
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2012 4:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks good!

The concept and story are interesting and the art is really strong.

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Starsfall



Joined: 14 Oct 2012
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2012 12:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really like it! The art style is a big draw (no pun intended!). Comics take a little while to fully load though which is a bit of a drag, but worth the wait.
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Dahill0



Joined: 31 Aug 2012
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 17, 2012 6:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Loved your comic. I am getting addicted to it. Good job!
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Elkonomics



Joined: 21 Oct 2012
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 4:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really like the art work. I would suggest maybe adding color in the webpage layout. I would keep the comic black and white, but I think the webpage feels lonely with the absence of color in it. I am not saying to add a red background, but a few splashes of color would be nice to break up the black and white. I would also suggest changing the font for your blog posts. The feel a bit dated with the computer type font you are using. Overall, the comic looks great... the story seems interesting.. and the layout of the page is perfect.
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Gual-kun



Joined: 23 Jun 2011
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2012 8:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice art! I like the site too. Checking the story Cool
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vaslittlecrow



Joined: 01 Aug 2005
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2012 5:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is a very good presentation. I love your inking and the story!
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DoctorStevehatten



Joined: 29 Nov 2012
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 8:41 pm    Post subject: Dude Reply with quote

Pretty sweet, yo.
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dpat57
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2012 5:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good-looking pages, action plays out well, has that strong inking vibe I associate with the '70s, maybe. Bookmarked and will look again.
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mcmasters



Joined: 28 Jun 2012
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 2:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I love the art and I want to know what happens next, but my two cents is that it develops too slowly. If the comic comes out once a week, in reader time the guy has been fighting a rapist in an alley for about a month and a half now. That's a purely stylistic comment that is totally subjective; I'll still be wanting to see upcoming pages!
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mcmasters



Joined: 28 Jun 2012
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 2:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah I understand, it's the nature of the format. It's the kind of work you want to "get into" and read all in a row without interruptions. It is well done.
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salveyb



Joined: 19 Jan 2013
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 12:51 pm    Post subject: Awesome! Reply with quote

I have to say... I think your doing a great job on this comic! The inks are very good and the story is as well!
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