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Fourth State .... I'm back!! Haha
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antleonardi01



Joined: 05 Feb 2012
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 17, 2012 3:43 pm    Post subject: Fourth State .... I'm back!! Haha Reply with quote

Yup. New hosting. New domain name. New site design.

Most importantly, new comics!

Let me know what you think guys... Im very happy to be back. If you're super awesome check out the "support Anthony" page.

Love you all.

Http://fscomic.com
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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Mon Dec 17, 2012 10:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What I'm aware of is that the writing is a bit mediocre. Trying to find my humor groove.
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AndToBeLoved



Joined: 17 Mar 2011
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2012 6:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Some of these are pretty funny and worth checking out. But I'd be careful if I were you - your most recent strip (61) has Mickey Mouse. And you also have ad space (which I can only assume people are paying for). Maybe I'm wrong and there are things about copyrights that I don't understand, but I'm pretty sure you can't show Mickey Mouse with Disney's approval, especially if you are (potentially) making a profit from it. You could call it a parody of Mickey, but it's too dead on specific. I highly doubt Disney would ever find out or actually care, but still. Just be careful my friend. I mean hell, Marvel (now owned by DISNEY) recently sued one of their artists for selling original artwork of a Marvel character at a con. I can't remember the artist, but it was a big story. And Marvel won, which really sucks. No, it's not the same situation, but it just goes to show that Disney and Marvel suck when it comes to this sort of stuff. BUT, the Mickey strip was in fact funny. Haha.

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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2012 3:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for that. All I've been hearing is how crap the humor is. Personally, I think they're worth at least a chuckle or I wouldn't have written them ... but well yaknow I'm sure I could do better.

Not worried about using mickey. By the time my comic gets popular this one will be buried deep in the archive.
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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2012 1:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Maybe some art will get me some feedback.

Here is the newest strip. New character design and everything.

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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2012 10:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2012 10:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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AndToBeLoved



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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2012 3:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright, went in and liked the comic!

Maybe I'm just blind, but I'm not noticing much difference in the art style. 'Cept for the hands.

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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2012 5:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the like!

Uh the art is improving slowly lol. Maybe not a huge difference, but the characters have a lot more form. Before they were basically a ball and two lines, now I'm really making effort to learn how to draw
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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2012 10:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

http://fscomic.com/?p=80

Update. Marijuana joke! <3
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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 3:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This place is like a ghost town lol.

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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 3:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Show me some love? lol

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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2013 4:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

http://fscomic.com/?p=90

New comic, let me know what you think!
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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2013 12:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just added project wonderful ads to my site. I get a decent amount of hits a day and right now its absolutely free to put ads on my site. Please do it, I don't like the way the ugly white box looks lol.
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mcmasters



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PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2013 3:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey buddy I helped you out and gave your ad a click. My mail order Muslim bride should be arriving next week. Smile
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