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New MILF webcomic at 3d-milf-toons.blogspot.com
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Milf3D



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PostPosted: Wed May 12, 2010 11:11 pm    Post subject: New MILF webcomic at 3d-milf-toons.blogspot.com Reply with quote

THE MISADVENTURES OF CRISTAL BUTTS
This 3D webcomic introduces a 40 year old MILF with a seriously fat ass who's on a mission to fuck everything and everyone. Cristy's a sexy brunette bbw with a daughter hotter than her, and a fat old butt that's going to get pounded and punished over the course of the story.
http://3d-milf-toons.blogspot.com
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Gooberandcindy.com



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PostPosted: Thu May 13, 2010 9:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm speachless. Surprised

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 9:54 pm    Post subject: 3d milf toons! Reply with quote

goeber wrote:
I'm speachless. Surprised

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Speechless cos its good? Bad? Funny?

You should check out the site http://www.3d-milf-toons@blogspot.com !!!!!
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Zoe Robinson
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 12:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm 100% sure I'm not your target audience here but while I was looking over the pictures on the first page, what struck me more than anything was that the poses you're using aren't quite right.

It's clear you've put a lot of effort into the models and the textures of their skin, etc. but now you need to work on them looking less wooden. I remember reading photo comics from the 1970's and 1980's which had an almost rigid stock photo look to them. With the kind of story you're producing here (where it's clear you need to show a lot of action all the time) the last thing you need is a bunch of people who look like they've been told to "hold that pose" for the last half hour.
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ewomack
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 12:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The pictures reminded me of Second Life (well, certain parts of Second Life). Though you obviously take your art and site pretty seriously, I'm not sure that you'll get the responses you want here. This is pretty much pornography and this isn't really a porn site (unless I haven't been let into the secret room yet), so... take what advice you get with a grain of salt... if you enjoy doing these or if they're making you money, then definitely continue...
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jynksie



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PostPosted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 1:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

When a lil bit of porn comes across our line of vision, it would be unnatural not to look at it, even a little. Having looked at this, I feel victimized by really-really substandard work here, nothing looks natural or alluring to the eye. It's not meant to be an insult, but a bar to which your artwork needs to grow!

I didn't really read the text in the comics, because lets face it, T & A needs no sound, or words. I'd just omit all words and leave it to be explicit pictures. Also, maybe it's my age, but I feel what was offered has a "been there, done that" aspect to it. Why doesn't anyone ever experiment with watermelons? Can you do a watermelon that looks like a watermelon?

I'm concerned that your masturbatory techniques may not be much better than your art presentation, my suggestion is to keep practicing on both fronts and you can't lose! Just keep those hands moving and hopefully you'll reach your 2 minutes of fame with this endeavor!



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Milf3D



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PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 10:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanx for advice but Jynksie's comments harsh!

Anyone else want to comment?

http://herfirsttimeinside.smackjeeves.com
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 2:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Comic with line like "Get in there you great big butterballs!" can't be all bad. I don't know much about the area of 3D comics (especially about that genre you are representing) but it seems technically pretty well done to me.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 1:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Um......yeah.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 12:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

have you gone viral? Page won't load for me. Could be the connection I'm currently on. I'll check again in a few hours
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Milf3D



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PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2011 9:53 pm    Post subject: CRISTAL BUTTS IS BACK! Reply with quote

Check out the full webcomic of her prison misadventures at [url]http://herfirsttimeinside.smackjeeves.com[/url] and with other MILF toons at [url]http://3d-milf-toons.blogspot.com [/url]!
Whadyathink?
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ComixFanAndy



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PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2011 10:53 pm    Post subject: Hmm Reply with quote

I think it looks ok for a comic based around a fat ugly woman being humiliated... is it supposed to be sexy? Confused
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KLeslie



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PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2011 12:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh my.

Yeah, I have to agree with the others here - the models look alright (something off about those faces, though; they're a little over-the-top for your realistic style, even for porn. The blushing is also a bit too heavy), but the poses are stiff and the comics aren't really sexy at all, but that's just my tastes - I guess if people are into MILFs and humiliation they might go for a comic about it, but I doubt it'll be this one. I suggest using reference photos for the poses.

I don't usually read porn comics - in fact, to be honest, I though you were a spambot at first; the fact you're giving us the same links in every post don't help - but the dialogue in what I've seen is pretty bad and this is no exception. As Jynksie said, the sound effects are unnecessary as well. Unless you're going for comedy in your work I'd suggest doing away with the sound effects and writing slightly more realistic dialogue.

Your environments could use the same attention to detail you've given the people. The characters look out of place in them. I'll make the same suggestion I did for the poses - use references, look at photos of what you're doing, even go out and look at some concrete bricks and metal bars. Try drawing and painting them traditionally rather than digitally too; it'll help when you get to texturing.
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Milf3D



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PostPosted: Sat May 07, 2011 10:37 pm    Post subject: My comic Reply with quote

Yeh it is supposed to be funny. Big ass = sexy AND funny. And jeez if this was meant to be realistic?!! It's a toon!
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PostPosted: Sat May 07, 2011 10:37 pm    Post subject: My comic Reply with quote

Yeh it is supposed to be funny. Big ass = sexy AND funny. And jeez if this was meant to be realistic?!! It's a toon!
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