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[lunchboxmode]

Hi Everyone! I recently made this comic called LunchBoxMode. Its a super hero on going comic about a guy named Mr Grims that lost his family when he was young. It's a dark drama / superhero comic with a Tim Burton type of feel completely made from Sharpies! The being my first comic it is getting easier as I go along. Would love for you to check it out and tell me what you think.

You can view the comic at www.lunchboxmode.com

Would love to have any critiques that you might have no matter how harsh or nice they might be. Thanks a ton for taking your time.

[vaslittlecrow]

I am totally enthralled by the animated Sharpie action. I cannot wait to see where this goes.
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[lunchboxmode]

Hehe Thanks a ton for checking it out! Yeah this is all new to my but the story is not. Been in a bit of a rush to get this going and finally do something that I always wanted to do. Future panels will be much more awesome .

BTW Was checking out your comic.. Looks awesome

[vaslittlecrow]

Thank you lunchboxmode! I am sure that it will continue to be awesome. I have a few comics, but I will be sure to plug you on tomorrow's http://raspcat.com update.

By the way, if you ever decide that you want to have a links section on your site or on the forum, let me know. I am very interested in trading.
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Visit Catnose Comics and Velvet Rasputin to see my comic art and graphic novels.

[lunchboxmode]

I just reworked my comic with all the critiques I got from here and other sites.. Tell me what you think guys.. Be 100% honest!