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wstewart1986



Joined: 15 Feb 2010
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:51 pm    Post subject: Cabbage Reply with quote

Hey guys,

Check out my web-comic Cabbage

www.cabbagehasawebsite.com

I also have a new group going over at face book, anyone who enjoys the comic feel free to join Razz

http://www.facebook.com/group.php?v=wall&gid=343039941814

(Beware some content may offend, but lets hope not!) Very Happy
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smbhax.com
No! Don't post it there!


Joined: 10 Apr 2009
Posts: 2928
Location: Seattle

PostPosted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 12:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ooh I think I broke your site, it started going slower and slower and waiting for "wix.com" stuff, and then sort of stopped altogether. It's my fault!

Anyway what I saw of the comic looked pretty good; some of them were sort of toilet humor stuff which I didn't find impressive, but some were genuinely amusing or cute. I think I liked having the captions on them, as in season 1 or whatever it was, vs not having them as in season 3.

The "gallery" interface took some figuring out, mostly just realizing that "gallery" on the front page menu was where the comic was.
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wstewart1986



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PostPosted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 12:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah thats prob just wix.com, probably down for maintenance.. again lol I thought of changing to maybe a blog set up instead but haven't looked into it. Wix are pretty flash heavy.

I was planning on going through the images again and adding the captions like in series one but it'll take some time. I'd rather get a bunch of new ones done than go backwards though Very Happy

Thanks for the comments, glad you enjoyed them so far Cool
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AlmostPets



Joined: 27 Jan 2010
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 8:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks like you have a bit of a violent streak goin' on there...

Maybe I'm approaching this from the wrong angle, and let me know if I am, but it seems like there is just a big lack of effort in any kind of joke material. Your site is nice...the little animations and such add some pop, but I'm really at a loss for laughter. If you're looking for these to be "gags" or jokes of any sort, they need to be fleshed out quite a bit more. Putting a prop or headband on a circle does not a joke make.

Again, I may be approaching this incorrectly. If this is just supposed to be a "cute" thing, then I guess it's mission accomplished. However, it seems like you put a lot of effort into the appearance of your site, and if you carried some of that into your writing/setup/execution of funny stuff, I think it would go a long way.
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nothinghappenedtoday



Joined: 15 Jun 2009
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Location: Richmond Va

PostPosted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 8:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think that your stuff works better as a T-Shirt, or some type of novelty greeting card. I do like the way your site is set up though!
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wstewart1986



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PostPosted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 10:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

AlmostPets wrote:
Looks like you have a bit of a violent streak goin' on there...

Maybe I'm approaching this from the wrong angle, and let me know if I am, but it seems like there is just a big lack of effort in any kind of joke material. Your site is nice...the little animations and such add some pop, but I'm really at a loss for laughter. If you're looking for these to be "gags" or jokes of any sort, they need to be fleshed out quite a bit more. Putting a prop or headband on a circle does not a joke make.

Again, I may be approaching this incorrectly. If this is just supposed to be a "cute" thing, then I guess it's mission accomplished. However, it seems like you put a lot of effort into the appearance of your site, and if you carried some of that into your writing/setup/execution of funny stuff, I think it would go a long way.


Thanks for the comments, none of the early gags are really full blown jokes.

I've started moving into strips though and I've moved away from the prop thing a bit!


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PostPosted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Heres a late pancake day Cabbage Very Happy

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Added a new Cabbage : Cabbage is "cleaning" his room
Archive - Series 3

www.cabbagehasawebsite.com

Also at
http://wiggagram.deviantart.com/art/Cabbage-is-cleaning-his-room-156244799

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 3:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ooh pancakes! :D
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wstewart1986



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PostPosted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 2:37 pm    Post subject: For those interested... Reply with quote

Cabbage t-shirts are finally available for order and payment through pay-pal!

Postage Prices are based on Royal Mail tariffs and should be no more than 2 to anywhere in the UK.

Use the contact page for International prices

Sorry for the delay Very Happy

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Revamped Site!

http://cabbage.thecomicseries.com/

Greetings!

So I've decided to get rid of the old site. I got some complaints about wix.com not loading up and the heavy flash doesn't help much so I decided to use comic fury to setup a new site.

I'm not sure if I can transfer the domain name from www.cabbagehasawebsite.com but I'll find out asap and make a blog about it.

This set up seems much better, you can now subscribe to the blog, post comments on the gags and rate the comics themselves!

I've uploaded a few comics to begin with and it looks pretty good. A big plus is now you can see the bigger strips without having to navigate around deviant art.

So stay tuned for a easier and more accessible and interactive Cabbage site!

William
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 2:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Whoo! Updated

All 70 current Cabbage comics are now uploaded! Every series so far, 1-3 & The festive gags!

Stay tuned for new Cabbage gags every week!

Quite happy to take Cabbage Caricature requests!

Just send an email!

william_stewart01@hotmail.com
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2012 5:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Site updated with new strips!

http://cabbage.thecomicseries.com/archive/


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