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[TripleB]

http://yakageforce.co.uk

Yakage Force is written and Ilustrated by TripleB. It began it's run March 16, 2008.

In the year 2023, there is a group who go by the name of Yakage Force. A secret team who's un-official mission is to protect the world from any super powers that threaten it and those who live in it.

Founded by Isamu Yakage, His son Adam Yakage and his creation, the android named No1, form the group to protect the world.

Once a woman named Isabelle Foster attacks them against her own will, Yakage Force realises that life is about to get a lot more complicated for them all.
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Comments and suggestions on improvements are encouraged. This is my first time physically making a site so I'm still learning CSS D:

Anyway, feel free to critique here or on the site itself, I've been trying to get some suggestions for the longest time and people just don't seem interested in giving them...

I've completely redrawn chapter 1 as the original was pretty horrible, chapter 2 needs some pages redoing as does chapter 3 but it's readable. Just letting you know.

[smbhax.com]

I like the bold shading you use on some of the color pages.

As far as the site goes, I'd suggest just having it start on the latest page; if you don't do it that way, people who come in being used to comics that do it that way (which seem to comprise the vast majority) will be confused, and they might be slightly less willing to come back than they would be otherwise because they'll know they'll have to load an extra page to get to the new stuff.

In any case, having it start on a page that is neither the first nor the last--but is somewhere in between, maybe??--is just kind of mystifying! :o
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[TripleB]

it's just a welcome page, but yeah i'll change it, thanks for the input.

[CannibalJesse]

I must say, I was more than disappointed that your comic had a distinct lack of yaks. Your name is misleading. However, you've given me a great idea for a made-for-TV-movie about a team of yaks that win the Iditarod.

Your comic is pretty much the opposite of my tastes, so I'd feel weird critiquing you without a bias, but I'll say a few quick things. It's clear your art is strong, though maybe cliched, and there is always a market for this type of story. Sometimes, you have sketchy and crisply drawn panels on the same page. Both styles are good on their own, but together I find the art becomes distracting.

[TripleB]

I'm sorry to hear that. It's something to think about though, so for that, thank you.

[beinlister]

I think you could make a series for that web comic. It is quite good but it should be in order to read it properly. I think your comics need a good website for popular comics and mangas.

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[TripleB]

New and improved layout, it should work better. Chapter 9 is also nearing completion~

[TripleB]

Still here! Now on chapter 12 (almost done also!) http://yakageforce.co.uk/