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[CF-Jot]

Hello, everybody. New to this forum and take the possiblilty to present my new wecomic "we all can dream", which starts this month. It is some kind of scienfe-fiction, some kind of fantasy and some kind of religion. It s a huge project I think I will spent many years with it.
My former webcomic, a gender swich stroy, was roughly around 600 pages huge and took me over 3 Years to draw. Maybe someone knew it "She !s me!" or "Oh no! I am a girl"
http://www.comicgate.de/webcomics/she-s-me-oh-no-im-a-girl.html
(there are currenty only 130 pages translated, but further translation is in progress)
My new project I start parallel in German as in English. This time I try to translate on my own, so one of my goals with this project is, to improve next to my drawing skills my english skills, too.
I am planning a website for the new project, but not before I hav not over 50 Pages finished. After 50 Pages I will see, if this comic is worth to put extra afford in a page. So the first 14 Pages are shown here.

I try to update the comic every month. It is the first comic I colorize digital, my former clorations are all done with copics. So I have a lot to learn here, too.
Please don't hold back, if my English sucks
and of course don't hold back, if my drawings suck, too. I am always willing to learn and improve

Enjoy!

[vaslittlecrow]

I love the art and muted colors on this. The character design is very nice. Do you have a website for this series yet?

[antleonardi01]

I love your art. I love this comic. Everything about it is pretty great, and I want to see more of it.

If I could offer any advice it's that the pacing seems a bit slow especially for very beginning of the comic. There's no real BAMMM moment that peaks my curiosity and makes me want to keep reading. As a fellow illustrator and such I'm naturally very interested in comics, and continued to read, but I don't think theres enough there to hold most peoples attention.

I find your work to be fantastic though, just trying to be helpful!

[CF-Jot]

Thanks, both of you

antleonardi01 wrote:

but I don't think theres enough there to hold most peoples attention.

Unfortunately you are right. I had to abandon this project some weeks ago.
you can see the rest of it at dev art
http://cf-jot.deviantart.com/gallery/32933988