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Doctor Chu - First Story Arc Done! Critique?

 
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kittensoft



Joined: 31 May 2012
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 5:56 pm    Post subject: Doctor Chu - First Story Arc Done! Critique? Reply with quote

I've finished the first story arc of Doctor Chu, and would definitely appreciate some constructive critique (this is the first comic I've done in years).

Here's the Webcomic Listing page for it: http://www.thewebcomiclist.com/p/21587/Doctor-Chu

Thanks! Very Happy
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iaviv



Joined: 03 Sep 2011
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 9:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not really criticism or anything like that, but I would advice you to change the color of the navigation buttons (you know, First, Next, all that). It took me way too long to find them, I almost gave up altogether.
Also, pretty cool comic.
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kittensoft



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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 12:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Eeep! (and thanks!) I'll make a note of that and see if I can figure out how to change things (they might look better if they were a tad bigger too, now that I'm taking a look)...

I'm actually VERY new to wordpress/coding in general, making the website has been a challenge so far, though there are a few things I'm hoping to change once I get a bit more experience with it (bah, still can't figure out how to move down the banner after several tries...^^Wink.
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Uncle Greedy



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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree about the navigation buttons, i would have never found them if iaviv wouldn't have mentioned the problem.
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kittensoft



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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 2:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Managed to figure out how to change the color...does this look any better?

Bah, couldn't figure out how to change the size or position though...
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vaslittlecrow



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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 3:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The comic is really good, but the site design is kind of busy and distracting. I can see the navigation, but it is a little hard to spot.
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kittensoft



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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 4:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the feedback Smile I changed the colors of some of the text and added in a plain BG...still very much a WIP (want to make a better looking background once I figure out how to do the coding properly) though I think the text/blog portions look a lot more readable now.
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iaviv



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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 7:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Maybe make the background black or the same pattern of stars as the banner and then the navigation in white? It's already better than before, though, so that's good.
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