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[leth.hate]

Hi everyone!
I've been doing a comic called Leth Hate for a bit oer a year now. So far the feedback has been pretty positive.
This is the fourth comic series I've done. It's somewhat of an experiment as I removed a lot of the self censoring that I would have exercised in previous series.

Website: http://leth.smackjeeves.com/

Any comments?

[Rayof2K]

I read the "Something Like That" storyline and liked it for the most part. I like the art direction and the tattered paper textured.

The succubus character has got to be the only character that really bothered me. It seems that her character has no business being their roommate and is only there for fan service and sexually themed jokes.

There's nothing wrong with that if that's what you're going for but It wouldn't hurt to give her some depth.

I like the comic a lot, but if I were to change one thing about it, I would give the Succubus character more attention in the writing and any kind of explanation as to why she's there in the first place.

Good work!

[Rayof2K]

Just read further into the comic and I see that you have in fact given the succubus more depth.

Sexually-fulled comics are not really my thing, but for what it is, you're doing a great job.

[leth.hate]

Ah, thanks!
Yeah, I shifted Giselle (the succubus) as main character. She's a far more interesting character than the others (for me anyway).

[smbhax.com]

Yeah I'm not too big on the sex and fan service angle, but the art is nice. Like, I guess it pretty much comes off as a much less subtle Sinfest, which I suppose a lot of the internet won't mind.

I'm finding the color/texture scheme rather hard on my eyes--the big bold, tightly spaced font as well.
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[leth.hate]

Yes, the font issue. Finding a readable font that doesn't look too out of place and doesn't take up too much space is a difficult one. It has become a constant source of headaches.