Of course no offense is taken for good advice on how to improve the comic, Christian.
Danie has just graduated from industrial design, and we expect she will keep improving on her trace and anatomy notions. I share all advice we receive with her, and she also appreciates it.
Layouts are half hers and half mine since I script them and then she actually makes them come alive.
I'm glad you liked my storytelling, I am still working hard to improve it and better translate my stories to the web comic medium. Any further advice on storytelling is always welcome!
Thanks for the quick review Christian