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nineteenletterslong · Joined: 07 Mar 2012 Posts: 1

I just started the comic in late February and I'm still developing a unified style and site design. It's hand drawn and brought into illustrator to clean up and add color to the ones that have color. The site is pretty basic html/css that I put together myself as I'm learning. I'm not on a set posting schedule yet (trying to figure out the best times for me) and I'm working on writing an RSS feed. Things will be changing in the near future once I find an appropriate path to head down. Would really love some feedback though! And please, the harsher and more honest the better, I can take it. Chances are, your negative opinions are probably something I feel too, but just haven't gotten my lazy ass kicked for it to change it.

Nineteen Letters Long

Thanks!
-brian

iaviv · Joined: 03 Sep 2011 Posts: 257

Clever title and funny puns.
Most of the drawings are quite good, simple and fit perfectly for this kind of humor. The art on "Catholicism" and "Fifth of July" (only the lower part) is weaker, though. If I had to pick one particular style I'd like to see you stick to - I would go with "Mustard Stash" - the simplest coloring and the clearest drawings.
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