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Captain Moosestash and the Incredible Flying Machine
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vaslittlecrow



Joined: 01 Aug 2005
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2012 7:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So glad it's back. I was having withdrawals.
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captmoosestash



Joined: 08 Jan 2012
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2012 5:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

vaslittlecrow wrote:
So glad it's back. I was having withdrawals.


Awe shucks, sorry it took so long, I had some life issues
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vaslittlecrow



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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2012 5:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I hope everything is better.
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captmoosestash



Joined: 08 Jan 2012
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2012 7:31 pm    Post subject: New Page!!! Reply with quote

Between Scylla & Charybdis

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=165

Thanks for reading!!!

If you enjoy reading, make sure to like my facebook page!
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antleonardi01



Joined: 05 Feb 2012
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2012 6:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Been a fan of this comic since like day one.

You continue to impress me with your growth.

Liked you on facebook Smile

Episode 04 page 17, the first images. Are they floating in front of the building? Sort of confusing.
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captmoosestash



Joined: 08 Jan 2012
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2012 6:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

antleonardi01 wrote:
Been a fan of this comic since like day one.

You continue to impress me with your growth.

Liked you on facebook Smile

Episode 04 page 17, the first images. Are they floating in front of the building? Sort of confusing.


Thank you for your kind words.
I tend to do panels without borders, hence the first "panel" on that page
The idea of that panel is that they just got off the steambike and are getting ready to climb up the building

Thank you for reading, and friending me Smile
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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2012 11:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

See below


Last edited by antleonardi01 on Thu Dec 20, 2012 11:39 pm; edited 1 time in total
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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2012 11:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I know, I like your borderless panels quite a bit, but sometimes they don't quite work.

This one specifically because you can see them standing on the grass in the next frame. It's a pretty cool idea to use the same building for two different frames, but to make it would you would have to make it looks like they are standing on the grass. Hold on... I'll do a quick photoshop and see if i can help.

Okay, I did the grass to show you what I mean. Also, the middle frame with the yellow background, I added a little bit of shading to show you how much your art can benefit from a consistent light source. Just imagine the light coming directly from one side and shade everything thats either facing away from the light source or obstructed by a feature blocking its path.

Hope this is helpful:



Lastly, I would head over to http://www.blambot.com/ and pickup a nice comicy font to use. Just as an extra touch of goodness.

Thats all the critique I've got for now. Keep on making em. Don't quite, I love them! Looks like Vas does too.
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captmoosestash



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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2012 9:24 pm    Post subject: Happy Holidays!!! Reply with quote

Happy Holidays everybody!!!

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=166

Thanks for reading!!!

@antleonardi01 -
Thank you for the critique, I actually asked my gf about that panel too and she said the same thing you did.
Definitely checking out blambot for fonts, thank you!
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antleonardi01



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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2012 11:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really love the little robot dog lol.
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captmoosestash



Joined: 08 Jan 2012
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2012 8:25 pm    Post subject: New Page!!! Reply with quote

A distinguished gent

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=167

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captmoosestash



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2013 4:18 pm    Post subject: New Page!!! Reply with quote

Riddles in the dark
Possibly NSFW? I work for corp amurica and I think I would be okay to read this at work, but who knows?

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=168

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Uncle Greedy



Joined: 02 Jun 2011
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 1:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm never sure what is and what not... I would say no comic is safe for work, as you are supposed to work and don't read comics instead. Even in the break, it's not your private computer anyway.
Personally I think the strip is really harmless, but who knows today.
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captmoosestash



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2013 3:37 pm    Post subject: New Page!!! Reply with quote

I figured, what the hey, why not put up a page today and my regular one up tomorrow.

The safe cracker

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=169

Thanks for reading!!!

@Uncle Greedy - I tend to read (and draw) comics while I'm at work, and I actually drew that last page while I was at work. The NSFW for me, is if I were reading a comic on my phone, and someone were to walk by and see, would they be offended? Could I possibly be reprimanded for reading or viewing explicit material? That's all I'm saying. After review though I think the last page is just a big innuendo, which are mostly harmless.
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captmoosestash



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2013 3:40 pm    Post subject: New Page!!! Reply with quote

As promised, my weekly update.

Plan B

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=170

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