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[vaslittlecrow]

So glad it's back. I was having withdrawals.
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[captmoosestash]

vaslittlecrow wrote:

So glad it's back. I was having withdrawals.

Awe shucks, sorry it took so long, I had some life issues

[vaslittlecrow]

I hope everything is better.
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[captmoosestash]

Between Scylla & Charybdis

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=165

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[antleonardi01]

Been a fan of this comic since like day one.

You continue to impress me with your growth.

Liked you on facebook

Episode 04 page 17, the first images. Are they floating in front of the building? Sort of confusing.

[captmoosestash]

antleonardi01 wrote:

Been a fan of this comic since like day one. You continue to impress me with your growth. Liked you on facebook Episode 04 page 17, the first images. Are they floating in front of the building? Sort of confusing.

Thank you for your kind words.
I tend to do panels without borders, hence the first "panel" on that page
The idea of that panel is that they just got off the steambike and are getting ready to climb up the building

Thank you for reading, and friending me

[antleonardi01]

See below

[antleonardi01]

I know, I like your borderless panels quite a bit, but sometimes they don't quite work.

This one specifically because you can see them standing on the grass in the next frame. It's a pretty cool idea to use the same building for two different frames, but to make it would you would have to make it looks like they are standing on the grass. Hold on... I'll do a quick photoshop and see if i can help.

Okay, I did the grass to show you what I mean. Also, the middle frame with the yellow background, I added a little bit of shading to show you how much your art can benefit from a consistent light source. Just imagine the light coming directly from one side and shade everything thats either facing away from the light source or obstructed by a feature blocking its path.

Hope this is helpful:



Lastly, I would head over to http://www.blambot.com/ and pickup a nice comicy font to use. Just as an extra touch of goodness.

Thats all the critique I've got for now. Keep on making em. Don't quite, I love them! Looks like Vas does too.

[captmoosestash]

Happy Holidays everybody!!!

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=166

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@antleonardi01 -
Thank you for the critique, I actually asked my gf about that panel too and she said the same thing you did.
Definitely checking out blambot for fonts, thank you!

[antleonardi01]

I really love the little robot dog lol.

[captmoosestash]

A distinguished gent

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=167

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[captmoosestash]

Riddles in the dark
Possibly NSFW? I work for corp amurica and I think I would be okay to read this at work, but who knows?

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=168

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[Uncle Greedy]

I'm never sure what is and what not... I would say no comic is safe for work, as you are supposed to work and don't read comics instead. Even in the break, it's not your private computer anyway.
Personally I think the strip is really harmless, but who knows today.

[captmoosestash]

I figured, what the hey, why not put up a page today and my regular one up tomorrow.

The safe cracker

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=169

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@Uncle Greedy - I tend to read (and draw) comics while I'm at work, and I actually drew that last page while I was at work. The NSFW for me, is if I were reading a comic on my phone, and someone were to walk by and see, would they be offended? Could I possibly be reprimanded for reading or viewing explicit material? That's all I'm saying. After review though I think the last page is just a big innuendo, which are mostly harmless.

[captmoosestash]

As promised, my weekly update.

Plan B

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=170

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