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Captain Moosestash and the Incredible Flying Machine
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captmoosestash



Joined: 08 Jan 2012
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:23 am    Post subject: Captain Moosestash and the Incredible Flying Machine Reply with quote

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/

Hope you like the new pages!!!
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Uncle Greedy



Joined: 02 Jun 2011
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 11, 2012 12:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I clicked on the comic because the title sounded promising. I am not really convinced of the artwork and see some room for improvement there, but on the other side you have all the ingridients you need for a great adventure story; a flying machine, mad inventors, weird crooks, robots and steamengines, all things I like. I am gonna watch how this thing will continue.
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captmoosestash



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PostPosted: Sat Jan 14, 2012 7:15 pm    Post subject: New Page!!!! Reply with quote

Short page, but more to come!

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=106
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Uncle Greedy



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 5:30 pm    Post subject: Re: New Page!!!! Reply with quote

captmoosestash wrote:
Short page, but more to come!

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=106


Hmm, I would say it was just clue and a whig hidden in the paperbag?
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captmoosestash



Joined: 08 Jan 2012
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:14 pm    Post subject: Two New Pages!!! Reply with quote

Two new pages!!!

Added a link to the "Check out my comic" forum!
Hope everyone gets some new readers!

Episode 03 Page 14
Episode 03 Page 15
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Gual-kun



Joined: 23 Jun 2011
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 5:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you for the link!
Keep goin!
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captmoosestash



Joined: 08 Jan 2012
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:28 pm    Post subject: NEW PAGE!!!! Reply with quote

NEW PAGE!!!

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=109

Call out to writers!
I'm approximately 3 months ahead of myself on the current episode and I'm beginning to write Episode 4 and would like help with writing dialogue. I have a great plot idea, but just feel like I'm lacking dialogue wise, anyone interested?
Let me know!
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captmoosestash



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 30, 2012 8:28 pm    Post subject: Two pages, one week Reply with quote

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captmoosestash



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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2012 11:40 am    Post subject: 3am post Reply with quote

Sometimes you hafta (real word) put up a new page at 3 in the morning
http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=111
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captmoosestash



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PostPosted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 4:42 pm    Post subject: NEW PAGE!!! Reply with quote

The artwork seems to get worse before it gets better
I will be posting another page tomorrow!

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=112

Thanks for reading!
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vaslittlecrow



Joined: 01 Aug 2005
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 5:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you are concerned with the art, allow some extra time to work on it. Otherwise, your story is solid.
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captmoosestash



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PostPosted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 9:06 pm    Post subject: NEW PAGE!!! Reply with quote

NEW PAGE!!!!

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=113

Thanks for reading!!!
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captmoosestash



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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 9:00 pm    Post subject: NEW PAGE!!! Reply with quote

NEW PAGE!!!

Moosestash gets confused why the Incredible Flying Machine won't move for him, then the horrible realization occurs..

http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=114

Thanks for reading!
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antleonardi01



Joined: 05 Feb 2012
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 12:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

If the comic is meant to be funny you need to tinker the jokes a bit. There's potential here, but if I were you I'd switch direction towards an adventure strip.

I like the steampunk gnome theme you got going.
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captmoosestash



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PostPosted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

antleonardi01 wrote:
If the comic is meant to be funny you need to tinker the jokes a bit. There's potential here, but if I were you I'd switch direction towards an adventure strip.

I like the steampunk gnome theme you got going.


Hey thanks for reading! I definitely realize I'm lacking on the dialogue, but there's more action and adventure coming in this current episode soon!

I'm going to get more input from a friend to hopefully make the dialogue for the future more engaging in the future episodes
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