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[Fastbro]

I'll see what I can do.

[JakobVirgil]

Very nice get more up.
-Jake

[CoinOperatedGirl]

I like them . I love the randomness of the humor. Also, nice and clean art style. Good work imho.
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[uncaringmachine]

At first, I was like "huh?" But then, I was like "heh". It got better the further I read. I like that it's it's simple and makes me smile. I just hope you can keep up a five day a week schedule. I've tried before, and burned out fairly quickly. Good luck!
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[Fastbro]

Thanks so much for your feedback guys! ^_^

[Fastbro]

Hey guys! Fathead recently smashed the 40 barrier comics-wise. So there hasn't been a better time to check it out!http://fatheadcomic.com

[antleonardi01]

Your jokes are really hit or miss for me, but a few of them really did make me smile. Theres a lot more good here than bad. Keep it up dude.

[conceptualleaf]

Most of the strips are pretty charming, (I think this might be due to the art style you chose to employ), and this makes even the less funny ones still likable.

Regarding the comedy, I think the funniest ones are the ones where the reader gets a genuine surprise at the end, like this one http://fathead.thecomicseries.com/comics/39 Now, I suppose your style of humor is really oriented towards these surprise resolutions which come at the last panel but for me, this particular strip is right at the sweet spot when it comes to the continuum of being too unexpected (http://fathead.thecomicseries.com/comics/4) or predictable (http://fathead.thecomicseries.com/comics/21).

[vaslittlecrow]

The sense of humor is not quite to my personal taste, but the drawings are sure charming! Keep up the good work.

[antleonardi01]

Spend more time making the jokes appeal to a larger amount of people IMO. Like I said, I really did like a couple of them, but a few of them just fell flat. Your style of drawing has a really endearing quality to it. This is a pretty good comic and I think that once you get the jokes to appeal to more people it'll be a great success.

Also your site's design is a bit sloppy and could use some cleaning up.

[Fastbro]

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Your jokes are really hit or miss for me, but a few of them really did make me smile. Theres a lot more good here than bad. Keep it up dude.

Thanks! It really makes feel warm inside when someone says my comic made them smile.

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Most of the strips are pretty charming, (I think this might be due to the art style you chose to employ), and this makes even the less funny ones still likable. Regarding the comedy, I think the funniest ones are the ones where the reader gets a genuine surprise at the end, like this one http://fathead.thecomicseries.com/comics/39 Now, I suppose your style of humor is really oriented towards these surprise resolutions which come at the last panel but for me, this particular strip is right at the sweet spot when it comes to the continuum of being too unexpected (http://fathead.thecomicseries.com/comics/4) or predictable (http://fathead.thecomicseries.com/comics/21).

Thank you. It's good to know that surprises fair well, I definitely bare that it mind for the future. I think the strip has evolved a bit since the early ones like number 4. (I groan when I read some of then DX) But yeah, this was helpful, your feedback is appreciated.

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The sense of humor is not quite to my personal taste, but the drawings are sure charming! Keep up the good work.

Thanks, I appreciate you taking the time to read it and I'm glad the artwork is working out.

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Spend more time making the jokes appeal to a larger amount of people IMO. Like I said, I really did like a couple of them, but a few of them just fell flat. Your style of drawing has a really endearing quality to it. This is a pretty good comic and I think that once you get the jokes to appeal to more people it'll be a great success. Also your site's design is a bit sloppy and could use some cleaning up.

Thanks for the encouraging words! I kinda find it hard to make jokes to appeal to as many people as possible. I've always been told to draw what I find funny, so I normally stick to that. Although I always take note of reader responses to find out what works and what doesn't. ^_^ I'm glad you enjoy the art, feedback on other sites didn't really feature anything about the it so I'm glad it's working!

Again, thankyouthankyou for your replies!

[HamsterRage]

I think the jokes and style are really great. I'm a fan. Keep doing it!

[Fastbro]

Thanks HamsterRage!

[Fastbro]

Hey! Me again! There's over 65 comics!

Here's a little selection:

[Fastbro]

Well, Fathead is hitting 100 comics tomorrow, so I thought I'd give it another shout-out here. Here's some recent comics to persuade you to check out the site.





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