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Fastbro



Joined: 12 May 2011
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2011 8:56 pm    Post subject: Fathead Reply with quote


A webcomic about wacky adventures, talking fruit and pointless conversations! Now featuring over 150 comics!!

Here are some previews to tantalize your eyeballs:









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Bjork



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PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2011 11:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i don't get it. are these meant to be jokes?
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Fastbro



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PostPosted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 12:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really? I have a wacky sense of humour, but everyone else I've shown it to found it funny. Maybe it's not to everyone's taste?
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Gual-kun



Joined: 23 Jun 2011
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 12:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, maybe. People have different tastes. I like some of em'
Also, Bjork, read the rules before posting -> Feedback Etiquette
Your comment is sorta rude.
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ewomack
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Joined: 05 Jun 2007
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 1:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I enjoyed the site and I appreciate this kind of humor. You of course don't have much there yet, but that will change. Keep it up and I'm sure you'll find others who appreciate it. Not everyone will, of course.
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CannibalJesse



Joined: 24 Feb 2011
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 2:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ooh. Oooh. Bjork. Do me next? I ADORE mean and unconstructive critiques!


Ellsimp, be careful with the constraints of your drawn characters. If they don't have hands, panels like the apple being pulled from the tree get a little ambiguous. Sure, I recognize it's easy to tell what's happened by the next panel, but I think you wanted it to be clear the previous panel too.
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smbhax.com
No! Don't post it there!


Joined: 10 Apr 2009
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 4:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, these aren't bad!
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Fastbro



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PostPosted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 12:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ewomack wrote:
I enjoyed the site and I appreciate this kind of humor. You of course don't have much there yet, but that will change. Keep it up and I'm sure you'll find others who appreciate it. Not everyone will, of course.


I'm glad you enjoyed it, it should fill up pretty fast as it's updating daily.


CannibalJesse wrote:
Ellsimp, be careful with the constraints of your drawn characters. If they don't have hands, panels like the apple being pulled from the tree get a little ambiguous. Sure, I recognize it's easy to tell what's happened by the next panel, but I think you wanted it to be clear the previous panel too.


Yeah, I looked back on that panel and I can see what you mean. I'll try and make it clearer in the future.

Thanks for your comments guys, I really appriciate it!
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Fastbro



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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 12:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Got some new comics up. ^_^ This robot one is one of my personal favourites...

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Gual-kun



Joined: 23 Jun 2011
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 10:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Simply but good XD
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NobbyNobody



Joined: 16 Nov 2007
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 9:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

A couple of those made me smile and I like the art style. As the previous poster said, 'simple but good'
No, the gags aren't laugh-out-loud funny, but that doesn't matter. They amuse and make you want to see more. Mission accomplished, now lets see more!

(I agree about the apple-plucking though, that frame doesn't work at all)
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Fastbro



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PostPosted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

NobbyNobody wrote:
A couple of those made me smile and I like the art style. As the previous poster said, 'simple but good'
No, the gags aren't laugh-out-loud funny, but that doesn't matter. They amuse and make you want to see more. Mission accomplished, now lets see more!


Thanks, that means a lot! It's nice to hear you enjoyed it, and I'll try to keep at it.
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Fastbro



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PostPosted: Tue Jan 03, 2012 9:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The archive has grown to 18 comics! There's plenty more to check out including a Christmas Special!

http://fathead.thecomicseries.com/
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Fastbro



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 2:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi guys! The website has recently had a makeover and comics are still being uploaded on a regular basis, with 24 comics now up.

http://fatheadcomic.com

Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Smile
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smbhax.com
No! Don't post it there!


Joined: 10 Apr 2009
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 4:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You've got kind of white edges around black lines next to gray backgrounds, and they're a little hard on the eyes. If that's from coloring with flood fill, try expanding the selection a bit--or coloring on a layer under the lines. If it's from using Sharpen, then eh use a little less Sharpen. ;)
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