TWCL

Fastbro · Joined: 12 May 2011 Posts: 35

A webcomic about wacky adventures, talking fruit and pointless conversations! Now featuring over 150 comics!!

Here are some previews to tantalize your eyeballs:

Bjork · Joined: 23 Aug 2011 Posts: 41

i don't get it. are these meant to be jokes?

Fastbro · Joined: 12 May 2011 Posts: 35

Really? I have a wacky sense of humour, but everyone else I've shown it to found it funny. Maybe it's not to everyone's taste?

Gual-kun · Joined: 23 Jun 2011 Posts: 249

Well, maybe. People have different tastes. I like some of em'
Also, Bjork, read the rules before posting -> Feedback Etiquette
Your comment is sorta rude.

ewomack · Grand prize winner! Joined: 05 Jun 2007 Posts: 346

I enjoyed the site and I appreciate this kind of humor. You of course don't have much there yet, but that will change. Keep it up and I'm sure you'll find others who appreciate it. Not everyone will, of course.
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CannibalJesse · Joined: 24 Feb 2011 Posts: 66

Ooh. Oooh. Bjork. Do me next? I ADORE mean and unconstructive critiques!

Ellsimp, be careful with the constraints of your drawn characters. If they don't have hands, panels like the apple being pulled from the tree get a little ambiguous. Sure, I recognize it's easy to tell what's happened by the next panel, but I think you wanted it to be clear the previous panel too.

smbhax.com · Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 4:44 am Post subject:

Yeah, these aren't bad!
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Fastbro · Joined: 12 May 2011 Posts: 35

ewomack wrote:

I enjoyed the site and I appreciate this kind of humor. You of course don't have much there yet, but that will change. Keep it up and I'm sure you'll find others who appreciate it. Not everyone will, of course.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, it should fill up pretty fast as it's updating daily.

CannibalJesse wrote:

Ellsimp, be careful with the constraints of your drawn characters. If they don't have hands, panels like the apple being pulled from the tree get a little ambiguous. Sure, I recognize it's easy to tell what's happened by the next panel, but I think you wanted it to be clear the previous panel too.

Yeah, I looked back on that panel and I can see what you mean. I'll try and make it clearer in the future.

Thanks for your comments guys, I really appriciate it!

Fastbro · Joined: 12 May 2011 Posts: 35

Got some new comics up. ^_^ This robot one is one of my personal favourites...

Gual-kun · Joined: 23 Jun 2011 Posts: 249

Simply but good XD

NobbyNobody · Joined: 16 Nov 2007 Posts: 678 Location: England

A couple of those made me smile and I like the art style. As the previous poster said, 'simple but good'
No, the gags aren't laugh-out-loud funny, but that doesn't matter. They amuse and make you want to see more. Mission accomplished, now lets see more!

(I agree about the apple-plucking though, that frame doesn't work at all)
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Fastbro · Joined: 12 May 2011 Posts: 35

NobbyNobody wrote:

A couple of those made me smile and I like the art style. As the previous poster said, 'simple but good'
No, the gags aren't laugh-out-loud funny, but that doesn't matter. They amuse and make you want to see more. Mission accomplished, now lets see more!

Thanks, that means a lot! It's nice to hear you enjoyed it, and I'll try to keep at it.

Fastbro · Joined: 12 May 2011 Posts: 35

The archive has grown to 18 comics! There's plenty more to check out including a Christmas Special!

http://fathead.thecomicseries.com/

Fastbro · Joined: 12 May 2011 Posts: 35

Hi guys! The website has recently had a makeover and comics are still being uploaded on a regular basis, with 24 comics now up.

http://fatheadcomic.com

Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Smile

smbhax.com · Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 4:40 am Post subject:

You've got kind of white edges around black lines next to gray backgrounds, and they're a little hard on the eyes. If that's from coloring with flood fill, try expanding the selection a bit--or coloring on a layer under the lines. If it's from using Sharpen, then eh use a little less Sharpen. ;)
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