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Richtoon



Joined: 30 Jul 2011
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 5:29 pm    Post subject: Space Pest Removal Reply with quote

Space Pest Removal
This is an all-ages strip about two Aliens, Strad and Pelet , who go about their daily lives as pest control workers.



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Richtoon



Joined: 30 Jul 2011
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:10 am    Post subject: Reached 100th strip Reply with quote

Yay! I've reached a 100 strips! I haven't missed an update yet.
Hope you can check it out.

Back to super stealth lurk mode.

Richtoon
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dpat57
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Joined: 11 Aug 2008
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 9:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good clean fun, I like your style, it's clean and colorful. Reading your archives left me a bit brain-damaged Smile but it's the kind of gentle humor that probably isn't made to be overdosed on, so no worries. Congrats on reaching 100, here's to the next 100!
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Richtoon



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PostPosted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 3:28 pm    Post subject: Thanks! Reply with quote

Hey, dpat57

Thanks for replying.... and better still, surviving the archive. This is my first webcomic and while I feel relatively comfortable with the art side of things, I still have lots to learn about pacing and story telling.

There is still a bit of a buffer to go through, but once that is done, I hope to put Strad and Pelet through a bit more character development, plot driven stuff and be a bit more story driven. Kind of like a season 2 revamp.

At the moment, I am just enjoying the process and learning.

Thanks again for the visit.

Richtoon
http://SpacePestRemoval.com
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Blackfly



Joined: 27 Feb 2011
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 6:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You're clearly a very talented artist. The drawing and colors are very appealing, and I like the way you manage to close each strip with a gag/climax even though it is a continuing story.

Suggestions for improvement:
You might want to vary the line weights for the main characters, depending on distance, etc. The constant line weights rob the drawings of depth and make them a bit flat.

You way want to install a nicer commenting system like Disqus.

I like the clean, simple layout and easy navigation. However, that bright purple is a little strong. Maybe a a quieter background color?

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Richtoon



Joined: 30 Jul 2011
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 11:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi, Motmaitre

Wow ! Thanks for the compliments on the art. I've made the switch to Disqus. Thanks for that tip.

I am still mastering inking. You will see a slow evolution to the line weight due to the buffer. So stay tuned for that.

I had just hired someone for the site redesign.. so the background colour change might take a while. I am going to have to figure that one out myself.

Thanks for the tips. They were all very constructive and useful.

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http://spacepestremoval.com
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