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Infinity Burger · Joined: 19 Feb 2012 Posts: 21

I would do as he says.
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vulpeslibertas · Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:39 pm Post subject:

"Snog wants you to read Infinity Burger"? I can't resist the pun. Isn't this the snog that never ends? Does it go on and on, my friend? What if someone starts reading without knowing what it was...
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raines80 · Joined: 10 Jul 2011 Posts: 162

I really enjoy your strip. I don't have much time on my hands because I am usually drawing my own strip, but I will try and fit you into the select few webcomics I read.

Keep up the good work... and get the heck out of the food industry! It is making you go a tad crazy... Wink

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antleonardi01 · Joined: 05 Feb 2012 Posts: 128

Try not to recycle your art so much. It's kind of a turn off.

I like the unique premise though. The whole comic takes place in a fast food joint? Thats pretty new.

Infinity Burger · Joined: 19 Feb 2012 Posts: 21

antleonardi01 wrote:

Try not to recycle your art so much. It's kind of a turn off.

I like the unique premise though. The whole comic takes place in a fast food joint? Thats pretty new.

Cool Beans! Thanks for the feedback! Really and sincerely! I will definitely work some new art in to turn you on!

smbhax.com · Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:55 pm Post subject:

Since the strip is vertical, it kinda feels like the layout should be two columns, with the strip in one column, and all the other stuff next to it--would be less scrolling for the reader that way.

The art is pretty nice but I do wish there was more of it.

If possible, you should change the HTML title from the generic "My comic" to your comic's actual name.
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Infinity Burger · Joined: 19 Feb 2012 Posts: 21

I've often thought of the carpal tunnel that my readers (all three of them) might suffer from scrolling down my comic, and the lawsuits/medical bills that might ensue.

I am definitely rethinking some things.

As far as the generic 'my comic' html...?
I have no idea how to fix that.
I am pretty uneducated in the ways of compruters.

Thanks for the constructive criticism.

...very much appreciated!!!

Infinity Burger · Joined: 19 Feb 2012 Posts: 21

smbhax.com wrote:

Since the strip is vertical, it kinda feels like the layout should be two columns, with the strip in one column, and all the other stuff next to it--would be less scrolling for the reader that way.

The art is pretty nice but I do wish there was more of it.

If possible, you should change the HTML title from the generic "My comic" to your comic's actual name.

btw...I checked out your site. Your art is AMAZING! I wish you spent some more time actually drawing, and less time blogging about pens. A competent builder does not blame the tools for shoddy craftsmanship, and you are a 'competent builder'.

raines80 · Joined: 10 Jul 2011 Posts: 162

I agree with smb.. the scrolling can get a little annoying, but I found myself just going with the flow about midway through your comics. Not sure how you would change the scrolling without changing the timing of the comic. I would just tell people to purchase longer monitors.
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Motmaitre · Joined: 27 Feb 2011 Posts: 25

I like the clean, simple layout. Points I think to improve:

1. Pet peeve of mine: large banners. People will only look at them once, and after that they just get in the way and cause unnecessary scrolling. Yours is mighty. Takes up space, adds nothing, causes scrolling. I'd shrink it to about 20% of its height so the comic is above the fold.

2. The comic would wok just as well as a horizontal strip, and eliminate all the scrolling. Three panels above the fold, perfect. My comic (different subject matter, NSFW) is like that:
http://www.blackflycomic.com

3. I would stop the blogging, or put it under a separate menu header (news?)

4. The burger images in the scroll buttons are rather cheesy (pun intended). I'd lose them. They also take up unnecessary vertical space.

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Infinity Burger · Joined: 19 Feb 2012 Posts: 21

Thanks for the feedback.
I will take all of your very valid suggestions under consideration.
I hope you were able to enjoy the comic itself somewhat, aside from the layout distractions.
Again...
Very constructive criticism.
Thanks!

Infinity Burger · Joined: 19 Feb 2012 Posts: 21

Please check out my comic as it is finishing it's merciless attack on the political process. I think it's some pretty good satire/commentary. However...I am a habitual 'horn tooter'.

Also, starting Monday, Infinity Burger will be done by a surprise guest artist.
All of you who tire of my repetitive use of the same three illustrations will hopefully find this refreshing.

I penned the story. It is a homage to one of the finest films of the past decade.

I think it will be really special!

Infinity Burger · Joined: 19 Feb 2012 Posts: 21

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Is this not bad-ass?
The larger image is at www.infinityburger.com
Pam Harrison did this amazing art, and will be all this week!
Check out the amazing House of Muses (Pam Harrison's) work:
http://houseofthemuses.com/
http://www.drunkduck.com/A_Deviant_Mind/
http://www.drunkduck.com/House_of_the_Muses_1/5007609/
I hope you enjoy this story as much as we enjoyed making it.[/url]

Infinity Burger · Joined: 19 Feb 2012 Posts: 21

btw...Thanks Motmaitre for the pointers. I adjusted my site. I think it does look better. I could not however lose 'the cheesy' burgers'. I did make them smaller. Like Happy Meal size. Wink

Infinity Burger · Joined: 19 Feb 2012 Posts: 21

Check out a cool homage to "The Hurt Locker" at
http://www.infinityburger.com

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QJu1A-P9jJk
from 2:29 on you can really see Pam's genius in the scene recreations!