the artwork looks great. the only crit i would have is maybe you overdid the yellowy green lighting a bit. i found the panels with more use of shadows and contrasting light and dark more effective in creating the mood. but, overall it's really got a nice style and is well rendered. the story thus far is reading well. i like that you rely on the art to tell us what's going on at times and not text.
best of luck to you.

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