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[talesofthetwinmoons]

Synopsis

So, this project has been on the cards for a long while but in the past couple of weeks, it's actually taking shape.

Comic Blog

Working on getting a proper website up and running so when the teaser is done, there's a home for it and everything that comes after, but for now, concept art is being done and posted by myself (writer and original creator) and my friend who has generously agreed to draw it for me (the latest images are her work, linked through to her dA).

Her art is amazing (and really quick ), so here's hoping it'll go on to be as promising~


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The city never sleeps.

A hive of pestilence, murder and horror, humans mix with non-humans and only the strong or the foolish dare go out at night.

If you're oblivious, you're dead. But even if you're not dead yet then it's still only a matter of time for some...

[monkofmimir]

it looks promising

The art looks good too

[talesofthetwinmoons]

^^/ Thanks! Hopefully be more up soon.

[talesofthetwinmoons]

Some new art from Blue up ♥ link

[Chie]

Wow, I haven't seen anything like this for a while... Perhaps my favourite style.

Thanks for sharing ^^

[talesofthetwinmoons]

Thanks! I'll pass along the compliment to Blue

Keep watching for more concept art/updates!

[talesofthetwinmoons]

Some new art up since yesterday evening, by myself and Blue~!

[AndrewBCrisp]

Just took a gander at your synopsis and art, and I'm intrigued! Any news on when the comic itself will launch?

[talesofthetwinmoons]

First part of the teaser out later on today, as soon as Blue comes on (which should be soon).

Scripts are being written and looked over by people with degrees and above, so here's hoping X3

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Unfortunately it will still be released on Tumblr for the forseeable future, although hopefully I can arrange the layout of the pages so people are able to navigate. There is a comments system in place also for each post/page anyway as well as the usual Tumblr formatting, including an 'Ask Me!' page, should people wish to give us prompts or questions about the storyline/characters from time-to-time. We're aiming to give the readers something in which they can also feel involved

[talesofthetwinmoons]

[On that note, some new arts up By me and not blue unfortunately, but hey X3]

[talesofthetwinmoons]

Page one of the teaser is up! Don't forget to click on the image for full-view, and keep on following us for more! ♥

Comment on the image by clicking on the envelope icon on the left-hand side of the post!

[talesofthetwinmoons]

New website!

Tales of the Twin Moons @ SmackJeeves.com

Keeping the Tumblr for status updates and whatnot, but this way it's much more comprehensive for everyone IMO.

[smbhax.com]

Fixed URL:

http://talesofthetwinmoons.smackjeeves.com
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[talesofthetwinmoons]

smbhax.com wrote:

Fixed URL: http://talesofthetwinmoons.smackjeeves.com

D'oheth. Thanks XD;;

[AndrewBCrisp]

Well, your first page is off to a 'smashing' start.

One thing though - We seem to be lacking an "establishing shot" - a panel that shows us where this is taking place. We're inside a building, that much is clear, but is it a mansion, a house, an apartment, a castle?

I would probably replace Panels 1 and 2 with a single panel that shows the exterior of the building where this scene takes place (and maybe surrounding landscape/buildings/sky?), and with the "Crash!" sound effect present. That would give us a location, and still do the same job as your original first two panels. The rest of the panel layout is, to my eyes, clear, and I have no trouble following the action.