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smbhax.com
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Joined: 10 Apr 2009
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 4:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The humor is above average and the art generally gets the job done.

The only particular problem I had with it is that sometimes the print is a bit small. When you go with four horizontal panels here, for instance, I find the print a little too tiny to read comfortably:

http://www.wildhorsecomic.com/2011/06/09/wild-horse-vol-13-sleep-on-it/

On the other hand, with three horizontal panels like you did here, the text seems larger and I didn't really have trouble with it:

http://www.wildhorsecomic.com/2011/06/02/wild-horse-vol-12-slice-of-heaven/
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 9:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You might consider taking down and redrawing the strips on lined notepad paper.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 1:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wild Horse wrote:
As in redraw them on non-white paper? I kinda stuck with the whole lined paper thing to keep an authentic feel. Do you think I'm better off just going black felt tip pen on white paper? I admit it would be cleaner...

Felt tip pen on plain white paper gets my vote. Not sure if I understand the "authentic feel" thought -- the notebook lines detract, they don't add value. Just my opinion.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 5:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have you in my RSS feed now, that last comic sealed the deal.
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay... this is one of the most ridiculously funny and cute and comics I've seen in a long time. The crude drawing style makes it all the more better!

Keep up the good job. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 8:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="Wild Horse"]Hey guys, thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it!

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On the other hand, with three horizontal panels like you did here, the text seems larger and I didn't really have trouble with it:

So would you say I should try and only do comics that finish in 3/6/9 frames? How would I get around this?

Well, I don't think the number of panels matters, exactly; just keep in mind that having the font at a legible size is important, and if you're going to shrink your drawing down more for a certain comic, you'd probably want to draw the lettering larger than usual to compensate.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 4:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah it isn't like the skill test claw dredged up Ted's corpse or something, sheesh.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Congrats on the tennis betting success!
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 4:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

These are a Hoot! You all have a natural sense of humor and timing.
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Wonderdrome



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PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 8:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great comic! Just RSSed it!

As a side note (that's eight times as long as the principle note) I have "wild horses" from T&E's Billion Dollar Movie running through my head the whole time I'm reading. I guess this is a good thing. It just fits your comic so well!
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 09, 2012 8:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Always draw Wild horse. please.
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hipopotamo



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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 4:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aaaaah! You had me in stitches with that drawing guide! Spilling-up coffee all over the keyboard.

I might consider doing a guest comic now that I know I might master Wild Horse!!!


Cheers from the Hippo

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 6:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey!

Thanks for following my Girls in Twitter!

Any comments or advice is truly appreciated!
Cheers
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 20, 2012 3:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK, let me familiarize with the tone of your comic and I will certainly do something! I'm the writing part of my team after all =P

Any comments on my comic are also appreciated.

Best


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 9:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh man, Mild Horse! What an arch-nemesis! =o
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