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captmoosestash
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 Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:23 am Post subject: Captain Moosestash and the Incredible Flying Machine |
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Uncle Greedy
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| Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2012 12:24 pm Post subject: |
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I clicked on the comic because the title sounded promising. I am not really convinced of the artwork and see some room for improvement there, but on the other side you have all the ingridients you need for a great adventure story; a flying machine, mad inventors, weird crooks, robots and steamengines, all things I like. I am gonna watch how this thing will continue. |
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captmoosestash
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| Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2012 7:15 pm Post subject: New Page!!!! |
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Uncle Greedy
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| Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 5:30 pm Post subject: Re: New Page!!!! |
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Hmm, I would say it was just clue and a whig hidden in the paperbag? |
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captmoosestash
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| Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:14 pm Post subject: Two New Pages!!! |
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Two new pages!!!
Added a link to the "Check out my comic" forum!
Hope everyone gets some new readers!
Episode 03 Page 14
Episode 03 Page 15 |
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Gual-kun
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| Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 5:03 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you for the link!
Keep goin! _________________  |
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captmoosestash
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| Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:28 pm Post subject: NEW PAGE!!!! |
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NEW PAGE!!!
http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=109
Call out to writers!
I'm approximately 3 months ahead of myself on the current episode and I'm beginning to write Episode 4 and would like help with writing dialogue. I have a great plot idea, but just feel like I'm lacking dialogue wise, anyone interested?
Let me know! |
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captmoosestash
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| Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2012 8:28 pm Post subject: Two pages, one week |
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captmoosestash
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captmoosestash
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| Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 4:42 pm Post subject: NEW PAGE!!! |
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The artwork seems to get worse before it gets better
I will be posting another page tomorrow!
http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=112
Thanks for reading! |
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vaslittlecrow
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| Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 5:20 pm Post subject: |
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If you are concerned with the art, allow some extra time to work on it. Otherwise, your story is solid. |
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captmoosestash
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| Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 9:06 pm Post subject: NEW PAGE!!! |
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captmoosestash
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| Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 9:00 pm Post subject: NEW PAGE!!! |
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NEW PAGE!!!
Moosestash gets confused why the Incredible Flying Machine won't move for him, then the horrible realization occurs..
http://incredibleflyingmachine.com/?p=114
Thanks for reading! |
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antleonardi01
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If the comic is meant to be funny you need to tinker the jokes a bit. There's potential here, but if I were you I'd switch direction towards an adventure strip.
I like the steampunk gnome theme you got going. |
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captmoosestash
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| Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:05 pm Post subject: |
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| antleonardi01 wrote: | If the comic is meant to be funny you need to tinker the jokes a bit. There's potential here, but if I were you I'd switch direction towards an adventure strip.
I like the steampunk gnome theme you got going. |
Hey thanks for reading! I definitely realize I'm lacking on the dialogue, but there's more action and adventure coming in this current episode soon!
I'm going to get more input from a friend to hopefully make the dialogue for the future more engaging in the future episodes |
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