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~~~~~Fantasy Matrix~~~~~ (Fantasy/Comedy manga)

 
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Mannickin4



Joined: 23 Mar 2012
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2012 5:05 am    Post subject: ~~~~~Fantasy Matrix~~~~~ (Fantasy/Comedy manga) Reply with quote



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In the virtual reality game Fantasy Matrix, anyone can be anyone else. That's exactly what friendless and nerdy Emilee decides to do when she sees an advertisement for this widely played game. With her in-game pet lion Leon, she goes adventuring to become an "elite player". Sadly for her, she falls upon a glitch in the game that...transforms her into a male?!

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raines80



Joined: 10 Jul 2011
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2012 11:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like what you have so far. The shop owner bringing up her ingame character info was pretty interesting.

It is probably just me, but I think your art would really look good in color. I like your style and nice simple lines would really lend themselves to a colored comic.

Overall I think what you have is pretty interesting and well drawn.
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