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moobyj

Joined: 12 Jan 2005 Posts: 96 Location: US
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Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 4:21 am Post subject: Monster Zero is Go! |
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Updates every Monday and Wednesday.
Our story finds humanity dwindling near extinction at the bottom of the food chain. Monsters have emerges to lay claim to the world mankind once ruled. The survivors have taken refuge in fortified cities around the world and are governed by religious zealots.
Enter Valkin Moore, a hybrid byproduct of a failed super solider experiment. He's a mercenary for hire who's about to find out that his exsitence is a bit more complicated than he originally thought. Oh, and let's not forget Maggie May, a dead prostitute who functions as Valkin's ghost sidekick.
Action, horror and over the top violence ensue. But don't be fooled by the presentation, there's a bigger story playing out here. So give us a read and let us know what you think.
Contains Graphic Violence and Strong Language. So if that's not your cup of tea please disregard.
Thanx to all! _________________  |
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Beertycoon Yarrrrr!

Joined: 19 Feb 2008 Posts: 1382
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Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 11:46 am Post subject: |
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looks good, I like the art, but somehow the main character reminds me a bit too much of Wolverine. His backstory, his claws and even his looks.. _________________  |
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dpat57 Ich bin ein webcomicker

Joined: 11 Aug 2008 Posts: 2688 Location: Sunny/wet/windy Scotland
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Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 12:11 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah baby, looks good! Macho dude and his macho dialogue and his macho gauntlet kick vamp ass! I like the style and the delivery. I was rather miffed when I realized there wasn't any more! Keep up the good work. _________________  |
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moobyj

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Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 5:41 am Post subject: |
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Updates have been steady.
Every Mon and Wed @ 6AM
I'm 16 pages in and loving the hell outta the work.
If anyone is interested in commenting, I always enjoy a good crit. _________________  |
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dpat57 Ich bin ein webcomicker

Joined: 11 Aug 2008 Posts: 2688 Location: Sunny/wet/windy Scotland
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Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 8:12 am Post subject: |
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I like it, it's not every day you see a giant kangaroo get its brains punched out.
Tho' here's an unasked-for thought: you're giving your audience superior position over your protag -- we get to hear stuff and realize stuff that he doesn't. So when the truth is later revealed (to him) there's no surprise for us. Just the explanation of why they're doing this (which we can pretty much guess anyway). This reduces or even kills mystery and suspense levels. Something to think about for future sequences, maybe. Shrug, I could be wrong, has been known! _________________  |
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moobyj

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moobyj

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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:37 am Post subject: |
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Still going! Still trying to build up my readership.
Updating every Mon & Wed.
Check it out! _________________  |
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moobyj

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Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 12:05 am Post subject: |
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Issue/Chapter one is finished!
Comments and crits anyone?
BUMP!!!!!! _________________  |
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dpat57 Ich bin ein webcomicker

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Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 12:27 pm Post subject: |
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Ow! Hard luck, Chastity! Very nicely done. Unexpected twist after the half-expected twist knocks everything off-kilter. The voiceover pays off big-time. _________________  |
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dpat57 Ich bin ein webcomicker

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Sweet poster, with the flagpole through the head. The only thing about the greyscale pic is that it looks as if Valkin just cut his own dangly bits off. I dunno if that's intentional but it certainly made me go "Oooh!" Good stuff, I like reading the comic. _________________  |
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