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Doogl McDoog
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 2:00 am    Post subject: Atomic Elementals! Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 4:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Atomic Elementals is very enthusiastic. Kinda like your forum postings Very Happy . It (the comic) moves at a good pace and isn't dragged down by excessive dialogue, so here's hoping you keep it that way.

The expressions and body language of the characters are effective, and you CAN DRAW HANDS.... that's a plus plus plus point. But the perspectives need some work (last panel page 1), don't just give up on them.

But, I'm confused. So the guy who controls wind can walk on water?
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 8:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

looking good man, I'll be keeping my eye on this comic!

thos fishies that keep swimming under Jaze crack me up Laughing
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 9:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good-looking cover, and the comic moves. Gotta stop calling it total crap, I've seen your concept drawings here so I know where this has come from, and I can see improvements already. You're on an upward curve, keep up the good work.
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Doogl McDoog
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 2:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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lonelyfetus
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 5:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

For a startup comic it's probably the best I've seen!

My advice: Get it off deviant art and onto a site of its own!
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 7:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This does look really good for a first comic! Er, I hope that doesn't sound insulting. I guess what I ought to say is, it looks great, and I don't believe you've never done any comics before. Wink I wonder if I'll be in the minority when I say I like the black and white, and no need to go to colour. Your balance between the white space and the blacks makes it nice and easy to read. Smile

And yes, please get your own site! (Rampage network, perhaps?) And your own sig banner! Laughing I appreciate the way you've been promoting my comic, but now I want to see yours in that spot!
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 11:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 3:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very nice!

If you can't get a good host (I don't really consider SmackJeeves to be one Razz ) let me know and I can probably host you on my web-space. You can buy a domain name for $10.

I'd also check out Rampage Network first though, since they can do all that for free and probably give you much better support (if they accept your comic.)

If not, I'll be glad to give you some sort of rudimentary help. Just PM me and let me know Wink
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 1:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Um... I know the site's still under construction and all.... but navigation should be given priority above all else..... Shocked
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 2:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 9:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

am I sensing a little Avatar inspiration by any chance? Wink

looking great!
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