Thanks for taking interest in my graphic "chaosmos" (as Joyce would say).
Well, I don't really like poetry because often sounds just like "random BS". In "Quiet" I tried to summarize with symbols of various kind some bizarre stuff (Bucky Fuller's Synergetics, Tim Leary's Circuits and Kabbalah, among others) I'm reading these days, all compressed in a more or less coherent storyline. I know I'm no scientist and I have only a vague understanding of those concepts, but I try to weigh my words carefully. So, yeah, something is going on in that symbolstorm which "Quiet" indeed is: maybe it's a mess and maybe even I cannot understand it fully, but it's there and I try to keep it interesting.
Another problem is that I'm italian and "Quiet" is a translation
: I'm never sure if my grammar is correct or the words have the exact
meaning I want them to have.
As a genius
once said: I try to keep the lasagna flying.
May the Starry Wisdom shine upon thy tentacles.
That's an insightful comment you've made: I noticed that something was really wrong in my pages but I didn't really focused it. The lettering was done quickly and carelessly. In the second chapter I'll try to work on it as I work on graphics and words.