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[Valgrim]

Hey everyone. This is my current effort. It's a story of two brothers and a mysterious girl caught up in the events following the deicide of God. . It's very talky.



http://sm.dissentient.org

What do you think?

-Tom

[Metruis]

I like the writing quite a bit, looks like it could be an interesting story. I also like things like how the nurse definitely has some figure to her instead of being "sexy nurse", that kind of thing gets to me because I actually work in a hospital, lol.

I'm not too keen on the 3D art style but I know some people like that. I wish it had a less slanty font, but other than that, yeah, looks like it could get interesting.
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[Valgrim]

Thanks for the comments.

My mother has worked in a nursing home her whole life so I have no "sexy nurse" illusions.

The style has improved a bit since I did those first pages imo. I know what you mean. I've toned down the "3dness" for lack of a better word. Here is a recent page *spoilers heh*



I designed custom filters for a cel shaded style. A lot of work goes into it but I want it to look a specific way. Small pallette and realistic without being 3d in your face. Anyhow... Thanks again for the kind words and the input.

-Tom

Almost forgot. I love your paintings. Between Worlds is really great. I would trade all of my knowledge of 3d and cgi for a talent like that!

[Valgrim]

Hey everyone. Just dropping in to say that SM is still going strong with weekly updates on Wednesdays. Today the comic officially launched the print version so I'm pretty excited for my family and friends to be able to check it out (and whomever else). Cheers!

-Tom
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http://sm.dissentient.org