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Civilian - Online Graphic Novel
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Encicra



Joined: 20 Feb 2006
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 17, 2012 11:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

@Dahill0 Haha, thanks. Glad you like it.


Uploaded page 9 as well - http://civiliancomic.com

http://www.thewebcomiclist.com/p/22181/Civilian
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Encicra



Joined: 20 Feb 2006
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 3:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uploaded Page 10 - http://civiliancomic.com

Finally get to introduce the main characters girlfriend.

If you like the comic, give us a like on facebook. No spam, I promise.

http://www.facebook.com/civiliancomic
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Elkonomics



Joined: 21 Oct 2012
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 4:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really like the art work. I would suggest maybe adding color in the webpage layout. I would keep the comic black and white, but I think the webpage feels lonely with the absence of color in it. I am not saying to add a red background, but a few splashes of color would be nice to break up the black and white. I would also suggest changing the font for your blog posts. The feel a bit dated with the computer type font you are using. Overall, the comic looks great... the story seems interesting.. and the layout of the page is perfect.
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Encicra



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PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 8:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

@Elkonomics

Yeah, the site is really lacking in quality compared to the comic itself. It's definitely a priority at the moment. The current road map is to have the site up to par by the end of the first issue of the comic. Then once the site is taken care of I actually hope to covert the comic to full color.
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Encicra



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PostPosted: Wed Oct 31, 2012 5:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Encicra



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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2012 8:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Finally half way through the first issue!

Uploaded page 12 - http://civiliancomic.com

http://www.thewebcomiclist.com/p/22181/Civilian
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Gual-kun



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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2012 8:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice art! I like the site too. Checking the story Cool
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Encicra



Joined: 20 Feb 2006
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2012 4:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

@gual-kun Hope you liked the story Wink


Uploaded page 13 - http://civiliancomic.com

http://www.thewebcomiclist.com/p/22181/Civilian
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vaslittlecrow



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PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2012 5:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is a very good presentation. I love your inking and the story!
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Encicra



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PostPosted: Thu Nov 22, 2012 4:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

@vaslittlecrow Thanks! I'm just the writer. The pencils/ink credit all goes to Alberto.


Uploaded page 14 - http://civiliancomic.com

http://www.thewebcomiclist.com/p/22181/Civilian
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DoctorStevehatten



Joined: 29 Nov 2012
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 8:41 pm    Post subject: Dude Reply with quote

Pretty sweet, yo.
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Encicra



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PostPosted: Mon Dec 03, 2012 6:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

@DoctorStevehatten Thanks man! Glad you like it!


Also forgot to post here about last weeks update.

Uploaded page 15 - http://civiliancomic.com

7 pages left in the first issue!

http://www.thewebcomiclist.com/p/22181/Civilian
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Encicra



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PostPosted: Wed Dec 05, 2012 7:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uploaded page 16! - http://civiliancomic.com

http://www.thewebcomiclist.com/p/22181/Civilian

Feedback and Crits are all appreciated!
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Encicra



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PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2012 4:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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dpat57
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2012 5:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good-looking pages, action plays out well, has that strong inking vibe I associate with the '70s, maybe. Bookmarked and will look again.
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