Ok, I'm taking a dive here, head first. See where it takes me. Hopefully some where good.
Anyway, name's Frank and I own Bi-Morphon, originally called Mutualistic Android Organism. For the first 2 chapters, I just needed to start with something and go with it, so excuse the sketches. It's the story I'm actually looking for a critique. I started this about alittle over a year ago.
Chapter 3 is where I'm starting to settle my grounds. Art is still sketchy, but better. Fiddling around with Manga Studio.
Chapter 4 (current chapter), my style is starting to settle down more, so here is where I need critique/help with. My proportions are looking sharper. In the end of Chapter 4, I plan to redraw all 4, with the new (permanent) name applied.
Synopsis: Alien robots have been sent to defend the universe from dark alien forces. These machines bond with organic lifeforms, giving them special abilities such as super strength, super speed, among other abilities.
A duo keep failing, not able to save planets from utter destruction. After reaching Earth, they meet their human hosts and defend it from an evil thatís been unstoppable. Can the humans help the androids protect Earth? Or will they only postpone the inevitable?
Be gentle. ._.