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hipopotamo



Joined: 27 Nov 2011
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 10:33 pm    Post subject: M9 Girls! Reply with quote

Hello all:

Allow me to introduce my webcomic: M9 Girls!, the brainchild of yours truly and talented artist Danie.





M9 Girls tells the story of four college girls who delve a little bit too deep into a science project. They are gifted special abilities, so they could be a great hero team... if only their new found powers and disparate personalities don't pull them apart first, and their leader does not fall for their mysterious benefactor...

The story is a shoujo (my friends mock me because I write girly stories!) and is drawn as a beautiful manga.

We hope you like it, and please post your comments, critiques, shameless praise and what not here! We'll keep you informed of updates here.

M9 Girls fact sheet:

  • Genre: Manga/shoujo
  • Themes: Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Romance, Adventure
  • Rating: PG-13 (so far)
  • TWCL page for the Girls.



Cheers from the Hippo


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raines80



Joined: 10 Jul 2011
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 3:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like the coloring and the art. I noticed that sometimes one or two panels within a strip seemed rushed. I think maybe they are panels you are trying to fit a lot into and the art gets away from you.

Looks good overall.
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hipopotamo



Joined: 27 Nov 2011
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 7:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm glad you liked the coloring. I'm not really an artist, but I do the coloring myself, except for the covers and some of the special out-of-continuity specials. I tried to come out with something that would fit the general tone of the comic, along with my limited skills.

As for the rushed panels, I get the impression that you are referring to the "chibli" art on the "reaction" panels. As a matter of fact I was unsure about using these type of panels, but I'm kind of giving the artist a little bit of leeway with respect to composition, as we get to know each other (and she is the mangaka, after all). This is valuable feedback I'm passing onto her.

Thanks for the input, I'll keep working on my little pet project!

Cheers from the Hippo
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hipopotamo



Joined: 27 Nov 2011
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 10:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Update!

The girls pretty-up themselves, and we meet a new girl!

Check it out at the M9 Girls site.
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hipopotamo



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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 5:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Update!

It's all awkwardness between the Girls and her friend!

See why at the M9 Girls site.
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hipopotamo



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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 9:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Update!

Any ditches a friend, what can the consequences be?

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hipopotamo



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PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 6:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Update!

The girls arrive to the Professor's place and decide that science might be interesting. AnahÝ seems particularly interested...

Check it out at M9 Girls!

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hipopotamo



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PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2012 11:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Update!

Claudia knows how to behave for a job interview, and Any finds herself at geek paradise..

Check it out at M9 Girls!

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hipopotamo



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PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 3:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Update!

The girls land a dream job, or that is what Any thinks...

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hipopotamo



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PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 7:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Update!

The girls might get more than they bargained for...

This is the end of Chapter, I'm so proud of getting this far.

Now, working on a cover and preparing chapter two!

Check it out at M9 Girls!

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hipopotamo



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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2012 7:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Update!

The cover for Chapter 2 is here!

The Girls meet the Professor...


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hipopotamo



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PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 3:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Update!

Let us start with Chapter 2 of the M9 Girls!

Vero wants to know what the girls are up to.


Check it out at M9 Girls!

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dpat57
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PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 9:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 2 color cover page looks good.
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Gual-kun



Joined: 23 Jun 2011
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PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 3:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice work. Your style looks similar to the one of a friend of mine. Smile
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hipopotamo



Joined: 27 Nov 2011
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PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 8:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah yes, the cover colors.

You see, I commission the art, and then color it myself, because I want to participate in the final look and feel of the comic, besides just writing it. (Besides, I could not afford a color commission when I started the M9 project).

But for special illustrations, like the covers and holiday illustrations, Danie, my artist, does the full drawing. And she excels at it, if you ask my opinion.

Hopefully my colors on the regular pages are not too horrible!
I chose the style to go along with my story line, hopefully I'm succeeding with that!

Keep reading and enjoying and sharing your comments my friends!



Gual-kun, I liked Doodling Around for the art and the playful storyline, I'll keep reading it!
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