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[DessertSpoon]

hello all. i'm new here, this is my webcomic:
http://www.dessertspooncartoon.co.uk/

[smbhax.com]

Really lovely artwork, and I like your streamlined site design.

Some of the pages seem to be two strips at once, one per line, and that was confusing me a bit as they're right up against each other as if the reader is meant to read them as a single continuous strip. I suggest moving the strips apart just a little so it's clear that they are separate stories. I notice you're putting a dual title at the top of them (ie "artistic influences and cadbury creations"), but you could split that apart and title each one individually--the title at the top of the second one would serve to divide it a little bit vertically from the first, and would probably be enough to make them distinct.
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[DessertSpoon]

hey smb. thanks for the advice matey, good idea to split the titles.