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dpat57
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Joined: 11 Aug 2008
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey D, this is looking like a fun story. I dig your style, your strong line weights make the characters stand out. Heh, I share Luce's frustration with Lucelia, that was a smack-head moment in the plaza, but chuckleworthy. The smackjeeves comic looks neat.
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smbhax.com
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Joined: 10 Apr 2009
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Location: Seattle

PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 8:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I looked through the site, and that first page you posted is definitely the strongest, visually. Very bold and everything stands out nicely. Some of the halftones you use on other pages are really killing my eyes. 8p

The art on the double-page you posted is nice (except for the clock), but so squeezed out by that massive word balloon overload; it's like you compressed five pages into two and then into one.
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