Hey, it's not bad. I'm really curious as to what Glitchcraft actually is, so I'll have to keep reading to find out
You also left off at a cliffhanger...
I like Luce, probably because Lucelia is really annoying and Luce is saying all the things I wish I could say to her. It is interesting to see this story from both Phoenix's point of view and Luce and Lucelia's.
It goes without saying that the art is great and that I can tell exactly what's going on artwise.
Some negatives I have are:
When I scroll some of the pages, the shading hurts my eyes
but I can deal.
I'm worried your characters will come off as one-dimensional and it would be nice to see a little depth, but obviously there aren't that many strips out yet, so we'll have to wait and see, but Lucelia is annoying, judge is unquestionably evil, and Phoenix might be a little bit of the stereotypical "badass." But it's also true that they don't always have to be complex.
I'll look forward to more before I pass extreme judgment, but I like it so far. Nice job