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Doogl McDoog
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:38 am    Post subject: Glitchcraft Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey D, this is looking like a fun story. I dig your style, your strong line weights make the characters stand out. Heh, I share Luce's frustration with Lucelia, that was a smack-head moment in the plaza, but chuckleworthy. The smackjeeves comic looks neat.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 4:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 6:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Gaijinmanga Jeff



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PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, it's not bad. I'm really curious as to what Glitchcraft actually is, so I'll have to keep reading to find out Very Happy You also left off at a cliffhanger...

I like Luce, probably because Lucelia is really annoying and Luce is saying all the things I wish I could say to her. It is interesting to see this story from both Phoenix's point of view and Luce and Lucelia's.

It goes without saying that the art is great and that I can tell exactly what's going on artwise.

Some negatives I have are:

When I scroll some of the pages, the shading hurts my eyes Razz but I can deal.

I'm worried your characters will come off as one-dimensional and it would be nice to see a little depth, but obviously there aren't that many strips out yet, so we'll have to wait and see, but Lucelia is annoying, judge is unquestionably evil, and Phoenix might be a little bit of the stereotypical "badass." But it's also true that they don't always have to be complex.

I'll look forward to more before I pass extreme judgment, but I like it so far. Nice job Smile
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 8:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I looked through the site, and that first page you posted is definitely the strongest, visually. Very bold and everything stands out nicely. Some of the halftones you use on other pages are really killing my eyes. 8p

The art on the double-page you posted is nice (except for the clock), but so squeezed out by that massive word balloon overload; it's like you compressed five pages into two and then into one.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 9:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Gaijinmanga Jeff



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

My vote would probably be for greyscale. You have a certain mood going right now with the black/white/grey and I like it.

As for the shading I much prefer the solid grey.
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